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Message de chanmom posté le 15-11-2017 à 15:26:54 (S | E | F)
Dear sir and madame
I'm Chan Mom, Here is my new post on the site, and also I hope to get more respond to improve my English writing as well as English level.
Thanks for any reply.
Nowadays, everything in the world is changed whether work and daily life. It is an era of information, modern technology, lifestyle, and also new page of work which is really the difference from the past. People can enjoy whatever they want, everybody can get leisurely, without stressful, and also take pleasure in their task and the way of life. I mean, it’s not too much difficulty.
The first, everyday people cannot live without to do work, work is the resource of money, happiness, and also friends. While you have a work and get more money, I mean you can enjoy with entertainment, hang out with the friend in order to get happiness from life. It is really easy, don’t do in a complicated way.
The second, everybody has the way of life differently, some people like to hang out with friends after work to release stress, like to work alone and some of them go shopping. You know! All of this has a lot of in currently social. Honestly, you can enjoy life with these. So, I strongly support that it has no stress during the work and everybody can enjoy leisurely with the way of life.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-11-2017 22:59
Message de chanmom posté le 15-11-2017 à 15:26:54 (S | E | F)
Dear sir and madame
I'm Chan Mom, Here is my new post on the site, and also I hope to get more respond to improve my English writing as well as English level.
Thanks for any reply.
Nowadays, everything in the world is changed whether work and daily life. It is an era of information, modern technology, lifestyle, and also new page of work which is really the difference from the past. People can enjoy whatever they want, everybody can get leisurely, without stressful, and also take pleasure in their task and the way of life. I mean, it’s not too much difficulty.
The first, everyday people cannot live without to do work, work is the resource of money, happiness, and also friends. While you have a work and get more money, I mean you can enjoy with entertainment, hang out with the friend in order to get happiness from life. It is really easy, don’t do in a complicated way.
The second, everybody has the way of life differently, some people like to hang out with friends after work to release stress, like to work alone and some of them go shopping. You know! All of this has a lot of in currently social. Honestly, you can enjoy life with these. So, I strongly support that it has no stress during the work and everybody can enjoy leisurely with the way of life.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-11-2017 22:59
Réponse : Work /lifestyle de laure95, postée le 16-11-2017 à 10:43:47 (S | E)
Hello Can Mom,
Nowadays, everything in the world is changed (put it in the present)whether work and daily life. It is an era of information, modern technology, lifestyle, and also new page of work
which is really the difference (use the adjective different)from the past. People can enjoy whatever they want, everybody can get leisurely, without stressful (use the noun stress), and also take pleasure in their task and the (put a possessive adjective instead of the) way of life. I mean, it’s not too much difficulty (adjective). The (not the)first, everyday people cannot live without to do (without + verbe + ing) work, work is the resource of money, happiness, and also friends. While you have a work (not the right word here)and get more money, I mean you can enjoy with entertainment, hang out with the friend (pural)in order to get happiness from life. It is really easy, don’t do (pronoun)in a complicated way.
The (not the)second, everybody has the way of life differently
, some people like (like + verb + ing)to hang out with friends after work to release stress, like to work alone and some of them go shopping. You know! All of this has a lot of in currently social . Honestly, you can enjoy life with these. So, I strongly support that it has no stress during the work and everybody can enjoy leisurely with the way of life. Réponse : Work /lifestyle de chanmom, postée le 16-11-2017 à 16:18:23 (S | E)
Dear Laure95
Here is my correction, you know I'm really appreciate to see this.
Nowadays, everything in the world change whether work and daily life. It is an era of information, modern technology, lifestyle, and also revolution of work which is real difference from the past. People can enjoy whatever they want, every can get leisurely, without stress, and also take pleasure in their task and the way of their life. I mean, it's not too much difficult.
Firstly, everyday people cannot live without doing work, work is the resource of money, happiness, and also friends. While you are working, you get more salary/ money. So you can enjoy with entertainment, hang out with friends in order to get happiness from life. It is really easy, so don't make it in complicated way.
Secondly, everybody has differently of the way of life, some people like hanging out with friends after work to release stress, like to work alone and some of them go shopping. You know! that kind of this has a lot of in current life. Honestly, you can enjoy life with these. so, I strongly support, even though you work really hard at work/ seem to be stress, you can enjoy leisurely with the life style in the social.
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