Discours direct/indirect

Discours direct/indirect
Message de titan posté le 30-01-2018 à 18:09:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
j'aimerais si possible une vérification de mon exercice ci-dessous sur le discours direct et indirect.
Merci de votre aide ...

I. Mettez au discours direct
1.He asks me whether Jane is late
2.He thought that he had already read that book
3.She said that her children had already gone to bed
4.I ordered him not to switch on the T.V.set

Réponses:
1. "Is Jane late?" he asks to me
2. "I has already read that book" he thought
3."My children had already gone to bed" she said
4."Don't switch on the T.V.set." I ordered

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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-01-2018 19:27
J'ai laissé les 4 phrases que vous avez mises au style direct; j'ai effacé les autres car nous attendons votre travail personnel.

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de laure95, postée le 31-01-2018 à 09:53:01 (S | E)
Bonjour,
I. Mettez au discours direct
1.He asks me whether Jane is late
2.He thought that he had already read that book
3.She said that her children had already gone to bed
4.I ordered him not to switch on the T.V.set

Réponses:
1. "Is Jane late?" he asks to (enlever to)me
2. "I has (mal conjugué) already read that book" he thought
3."My children had (pas conjugué au bon temps)already gone to bed" she said
4."Don't switch on the T.V.set." I ordered

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de titan, postée le 31-01-2018 à 13:51:30 (S | E)
Bonjour,d'accord je corrige mes erreurs.
1."Is Jane late?" he asks me
2."I have already read that book" he thought
3."My children have already gone to bed" she said

Voila, normalement c'est bon
J'en profite pour revenir aux questions sur le discours indirect où j'ai quelques difficultés.

II.Mettez aux discours indirect:
1."Are you tired?"my mother wondered.
2."Stop laughing at me !"he said to her reproachfully.
3."Go away!"he ordered them.
4."Give them back their toys !"Dad suggested to Tom.
5."What will the weather be like tomorrow ?"he wondered.

Reponses:
1.My mother had wondered me wether I was tired
2.He said to her reproachfully that stopped laughing at him
3.He ordered them that went away.
4.Dad had suggested to Tom that gave them back their toys
5.He had wondered what will the weather be like tomorrow?

Merci de votre aide...

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de titan, postée le 31-01-2018 à 16:44:10 (S | E)
Une petite correction s'il vous plaît

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de gerondif, postée le 31-01-2018 à 17:14:56 (S | E)
Bonjour
erreurs en bleu
Gardez le temps qui vous est imposé dans la proposition principale :
II.Mettez au discours indirect:
1."Are you tired?"my mother wondered. donc: My mother wondered if.....
2."Stop laughing at me !"he said to her reproachfully.
3."Go away!"he ordered them.
4."Give them back their toys !"Dad suggested to Tom.
5."What will the weather be like tomorrow ?"he wondered.

Reponses:
1.My mother had wondered me wether I was tired
I asked her whether she was tired or not marcherait, whether tout seul marche moins bien.
2.He said to her reproachfully that stopped laughing at him
Bon, là soit vous changez de verbe: He asked her to stop laughing, soit you gardez she said that et vous terminez avec un should
3.He ordered them that went away. idem, soit vous passez par une infinitive, he ordered/asked/told/ them to clean the car, soit c'est plus compliqué avec du subjonctif: I demanded that they leave immediately.
4.Dad had suggested to Tom that gave(manque le sujet + un verbe en should) them back their toys
5.He had wondered what will(le futur devient un conditionnel et l'inversion disparait en discours indirect) the weather be like tomorrow ?

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de titan, postée le 31-01-2018 à 17:59:50 (S | E)
Re Bonjour,
Merci d'avoir répondu. Je recommence donc les exercices, après correction:
1.My mother wondered if I was tired
2.He said to her reproachfully that should stopped laughing
3.He ordered them to go away
4.Dad suggested to Tom that should give them back their toys
5.He would have wondered what the weather be like tomorrow

Merci de votre aide...

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de gerondif, postée le 31-01-2018 à 18:11:18 (S | E)
Bonjour
Vous ne savez pas trop conjuguer, il faut des sujets aux verbes !!
1.My mother wondered if I was tired. ok
2.He said to her reproachfully that (sujet!)should stopped laughing
3.He ordered them to go away ok
4.Dad suggested to Tom that (sujet)should give them back their toys
5.He would have wondered what the weather (conjuguer le conditionnel)be like tomorrow

Comprenez-vous la mécanique du discours indirect ?
je viendrai. I will come
Il dit qu'il viendra. He says he will come
il déclara qu'il viendrait. He said that he would come. le conditionnel vient sur le verbe de la subordonnée

will, would, shall, should, do et did sont suivis de la base verbale.
Listen !!
He said I should listen.

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de titan, postée le 31-01-2018 à 18:29:33 (S | E)
Re Bonjour, je corrige de nouveau mes erreurs.

2.He said to her reproachfully that he should stopped laughing at him.
4.Dad suggested to Tom that he should give them back their toys
5.He would wonder what the weather be like tomorrow

Je pense que c'est ça. A confirmer, merci...

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de gerondif, postée le 31-01-2018 à 19:07:13 (S | E)
Hello,
2.He said to her reproachfully that he should stopped laughing at him. voir note précédente.
4.Dad suggested to Tom that he should give them back their toys. ok
5.He would wonder what the weather be like tomorrow.

5."What will the weather be like tomorrow ?"he wondered. "Quel temps fera-t-il demain ?" se demanda-t-il ? va devenir:
Il se demanda quel temps il ferait demain.

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de titan, postée le 31-01-2018 à 19:16:51 (S | E)
Bonjour

Comme ceci ?
5.he wondered what the weather will be tomorrow

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de titan, postée le 31-01-2018 à 19:30:03 (S | E)
Correction de mon dernier post.
5. He wondered what the weather he would like tomorrow

Voila...? Merci

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de gerondif, postée le 31-01-2018 à 19:55:48 (S | E)
he wondered what the weather will be (manque un mot) tomorrow.
He wondered what the weather he would like(manque un verbe, like n'est pas un verbe ici) tomorrow.
What is he like ?
He is tall and handsome.

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de titan, postée le 31-01-2018 à 20:13:11 (S | E)
Bonjour,
5.He wondered what the weather he would is like tomorrow
Comme ceci ?

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de gerondif, postée le 31-01-2018 à 23:56:18 (S | E)
Bonsoir
5.He wondered what the weather he would is like tomorrow. C'est de pire en pire. A 17 ans, vous devez être en première ou en terminale mais vous ne savez pas conjuguer.

Derrière un auxiliaire , on met une base verbale, un infinitif sans le to.
I will come: Je viendrai
I would come: Je viendrais.
I must come: Je dois venir

He is absent.
he will be absent.
He would be absent if he had the flu.

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de juge, postée le 01-02-2018 à 17:14:05 (S | E)

I. Mettez au discours direct
1.He asks me whether Jane is late
2.He thought that he had already read that book
3.She said that her children had already gone to bed
4.I ordered him not to switch on the T.V.set


Bonjour à toi
1.“Is Jane late”:he asks me
2.“I has already read this book:he thought
3.“My children has already gone to bed”:she Saïd
4.“Don't switch on the T.V.set”:i ordered him

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Réponse : Discours direct/indirect de gerondif, postée le 02-02-2018 à 14:13:26 (S | E)
Bonjour, juge,
Titan a sans doute déjà rendu son travail et renoncé à corriger sa dernière phrase.
Vous arrivez donc trop tard et dans un sens, heureusement pour lui, parce que vous lui soufflez des erreurs !
I. Mettez au discours direct :
1.He asks me whether Jane is late
2.He thought that he had already read that book
3.She said that her children had already gone to bed
4.I ordered him not to switch on the T.V.set

1.“Is Jane late ?” he asks me
2.“I has(have) already read this book: he thought
3.“My children has(have) already gone to bed”:she Saïd(Ah, vous arabisez said ! Pas de majuscule aux verbes et pas de tréma en anglais sauf mot emprunté à une autre langue)
4.“Don't switch on the T.V.set”:i ordered him (I au sens de je s'écrit toujours en majuscule, où qu'il soit)

Pour ne pas publier pour rien, une petite précision:
I have already seen that film devient :
He says / he will say / that he has already seen that film.
He said that he had already seen that film.

Mais si la phrase de départ était déjà au past perfect au style direct, elle y reste.
He says : I had already seen that film !
He said that he had already seen that film.

D'où éventuellement un problème de correction dans l'autre sens, si on doit remettre cette phrase au style direct.

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