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Message de lowis posté le 18-03-2018 à 01:35:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je suis en 3e et j'aimerais aller en seconde européenne l'année prochaine. Pour y entrer, je dois faire une lettre de motivation en anglais, passer un oral et un écrit. J'aurais besoin de vous concernant la lettre. Que vous me donniez des conseils et que vous corrigiez mes fautes. Je vous en serai très reconnaissante haha .
Je vous en remercie d'avance ^^.
La voici:
xxx, March 17th, 2018
Collège-Lycée xxx
Subject: Application to join the European history-geography class next year.
Dear Madam, Dear Sir,
I am currently in 9th grade J and I would like to integrate the second European history-geography that my school offers next year. This class would allow me to acquire a better level in English and would allow me to confirm my choices in a profession where I could practice this language such as the translator's profession that I have already thought about.
On the one hand I would like to become bilingual because this is an advantage and brings an additional opportunity both in the world of work and in private life. Later I would like to move to Canada to do my studies, so being bilingual would help me a lot.
On the other hand, I really appreciate the English language and I would like to know more about its culture, which is why I chose to take history and geography as a non-linguistic discipline.
I am aware that this European class will increase my working time, but I feel sufficiently motivated and invested in my work to cope with it.
I would be grateful if you would consider my application and if you would accept, Madam, Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-03-2018 08:40
Message de lowis posté le 18-03-2018 à 01:35:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je suis en 3e et j'aimerais aller en seconde européenne l'année prochaine. Pour y entrer, je dois faire une lettre de motivation en anglais, passer un oral et un écrit. J'aurais besoin de vous concernant la lettre. Que vous me donniez des conseils et que vous corrigiez mes fautes. Je vous en serai très reconnaissante haha .
Je vous en remercie d'avance ^^.
La voici:
xxx, March 17th, 2018
Collège-Lycée xxx
Subject: Application to join the European history-geography class next year.
Dear Madam, Dear Sir,
I am currently in 9th grade J and I would like to integrate the second European history-geography that my school offers next year. This class would allow me to acquire a better level in English and would allow me to confirm my choices in a profession where I could practice this language such as the translator's profession that I have already thought about.
On the one hand I would like to become bilingual because this is an advantage and brings an additional opportunity both in the world of work and in private life. Later I would like to move to Canada to do my studies, so being bilingual would help me a lot.
On the other hand, I really appreciate the English language and I would like to know more about its culture, which is why I chose to take history and geography as a non-linguistic discipline.
I am aware that this European class will increase my working time, but I feel sufficiently motivated and invested in my work to cope with it.
I would be grateful if you would consider my application and if you would accept, Madam, Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.
name
Signature
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-03-2018 08:40
Réponse : Motivation/ 2nd européenne de dsmith, postée le 18-03-2018 à 06:24:53 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je ne comprend pas le "J". 9th grade J ?
I would like to integrate the second European history-geography that my school offers next year.
intergrate ne marche pas trop ici...je te conseille participate in
pourquoi "the second" second year? write "the second year" or 10th grade??
...confirm my choices in profession...
Peut être mieux "confirm my ideas about entering a profession using this language..."
such as the translator's profession
such as working as a translator
On the one hand...
On the other hand... (cette construction est pour deux choses qui contrastent ...qui sont opposés - ça ce n'est pas le cas dans ce texte.
First, I would like...
In addition I really appreciate...
"I would like to know more about its culture" - Does a language have a culture or does a country or a people have a culture? maybe better to say "...I would like to know more about the culture of English speaking countries..." or "of English speaking people" ??
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