Lettre/ motivation

Lettre/ motivation
Message de ja posté le 08-04-2018 à 18:46:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'apprends à écrire les lettres de motivation et j'aurais besoin d'aide afin de les corriger s'il vous plait
Merci pour vos réponses.

I am more than interested in the working student position , and believe that my education and employment background are appropriate for the position.
I currently study in Neoma Business School in second grade in the franco-german program. In September 2018 I will study in ESB Business School in Reutlingen in Germany.
I think that the job you offer fits me because I have done my marketing internship with strong results. I was in charge of the creation of the product visuals in partnership with 6 graphists and 4 photographs, the writing of product sheets. During my internship I was given a lot of responsibility and autonomy, but I also learned to be organized in order to respect deadlines. I was rewarded several times and the company hired me under fixed term contract. Furthermore, I have basic knowledges in Photoshop and Indesign. Actually, I designed a color label for lunch boxes during my internship.
I am sure that I will be committed and determined to achieve the missions that you described because I am a creative person who is looking for a stimulating challenge. I am a dynamic person and I am not afraid to have new tasks as I want to professionally develop myself.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-04-2018 21:33

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Réponse : Lettre/ motivation de gerondif, postée le 08-04-2018 à 20:37:34 (S | E)
Bonsoir
I am more than interested in the working student position , and believe that my education and employment background are appropriate for the position.
I currently study(forme ening) in Neoma Business School in second grade in the franco-german (majuscules) program. In September 2018 I will study in ESB Business School in Reutlingen in Germany.
I think that the job you offer fits me because I have done my marketing internship with strong results. I was in charge of the creation of the product visuals in partnership with 6 graphists and 4 photographs(photograpers plutôt, non?), and of the writing of product sheets. During my internship I was given a lot of responsibility and autonomy, but I also learned (learnt) to be organized in order to respect deadlines. I was rewarded several times and the company hired me under fixed term contract. Furthermore, I have basic knowledges(singulier) in Photoshop and Indesign. Actually(faux-ami qui signifie en réalité), I designed a color label for lunch boxes during my internship.
I am sure that I will be committed and determined to achieve the missions that you described because I am a creative person who is looking for a stimulating challenge. I am a dynamic person and I am not afraid to have new tasks as I want to professionally develop myself.
Il faudrait vérifier le sens de I am afraid to have par rapport à I am afraid of having...

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