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Message de merci posté le 26-05-2018 à 14:46:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire un texte en anglais sur mon métier de rêve; pouvez-vous me dire les éventuelles erreurs s'il vous plait?
Merci d'avance.
My dream job is a cardiologist. When I was younger I wanted to be an astronaut but I realized that I am more passionate about health.
I believe my dream job is more than gaining a position or a financial stabilizer. My dream job is truly to help others deal and overcome their pain. Furthermore, it is about helping them enjoy life with their full potential health. I know I must put effort in my plans to realize my dream. I can find comfort in those that support me and knowing the possibility of success. I can also always recall the inspiration of my grandmother. Therefore, I must keep the words of Kaseem in mind to remember that my dream gives me purpose. I can never be the person I strive to be without my good dream. Believing in myself is the key to true achievement.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-05-2018 14:49
Message de merci posté le 26-05-2018 à 14:46:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire un texte en anglais sur mon métier de rêve; pouvez-vous me dire les éventuelles erreurs s'il vous plait?
Merci d'avance.
My dream job is a cardiologist. When I was younger I wanted to be an astronaut but I realized that I am more passionate about health.
I believe my dream job is more than gaining a position or a financial stabilizer. My dream job is truly to help others deal and overcome their pain. Furthermore, it is about helping them enjoy life with their full potential health. I know I must put effort in my plans to realize my dream. I can find comfort in those that support me and knowing the possibility of success. I can also always recall the inspiration of my grandmother. Therefore, I must keep the words of Kaseem in mind to remember that my dream gives me purpose. I can never be the person I strive to be without my good dream. Believing in myself is the key to true achievement.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-05-2018 14:49
Réponse : My dream job /2 de here4u, postée le 26-05-2018 à 16:11:40 (S | E)
Hello!
My dream job is a cardiologist. When I was younger I wanted to be an astronaut but I realized that I am more passionate about health.(and people, perhaps?)
I believe my dream job is more than gaining a position or a financial stabilizer(Boff!). My dream job is truly to help others deal XXXX and overcome their pain. Furthermore, it is about helping them enjoy life with their full potential health. I know I must put effort in my plans to realize my dream. I can find comfort in those that support me and knowing the possibility of success.?? semble inachevé...) I can also always recall the inspiration of my grandmother
(à expliquer ...). Therefore, I must keep the words of Kaseem in mind to remember that my dream gives me purpose. I can never be the person I strive to be without my good dream. Believing in myself is the key to true achievement.
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