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Message de wiwi posté le 30-05-2018 à 23:16:15 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
alors je vais droit au but : je dois inventer le début d'une histoire dystopique en utilisant le prétérit, j'ai fait mon texte, pouvez-vous le corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.
A dystopian world
In a world already very advanced in technology, where transportation was able to fly and where automated systems replaced manual work ... Matthew Allen, Prime Minister of the United States and computer scientist, 38 years old, created an artificial intelligence , a kind of super-computer for the American government, named Xenos36 capable of creating cures for diseases, eradicating hunger and poverty in the world, preventing crimes and attacks, stopping global warming, innovate new technologies and other benevolent actions to improve the planet and the lives of its inhabitants. The creation of Xenos36 was a feat: it managed to make a happy world.
But one day, the benevolence of the machine was questioned. Indeed, Xenos36 rebelled: she blackmailed the government and threatened the world. The government tried to disconnect her, but she defended herself by modifying her code and so nobody got her way. The supercomputer took control of the world by force and terror. Xenos36 put the chaos there: nuclear bombardments, murders, economic crises, epidemics ...
The world was dark and sad, happiness and hope no longer existed. The machine gradually eliminated Humanity and multiplied robots and artificial intelligences ...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-05-2018 00:20
Message de wiwi posté le 30-05-2018 à 23:16:15 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
alors je vais droit au but : je dois inventer le début d'une histoire dystopique en utilisant le prétérit, j'ai fait mon texte, pouvez-vous le corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.
A dystopian world
In a world already very advanced in technology, where transportation was able to fly and where automated systems replaced manual work ... Matthew Allen, Prime Minister of the United States and computer scientist, 38 years old, created an artificial intelligence , a kind of super-computer for the American government, named Xenos36 capable of creating cures for diseases, eradicating hunger and poverty in the world, preventing crimes and attacks, stopping global warming, innovate new technologies and other benevolent actions to improve the planet and the lives of its inhabitants. The creation of Xenos36 was a feat: it managed to make a happy world.
But one day, the benevolence of the machine was questioned. Indeed, Xenos36 rebelled: she blackmailed the government and threatened the world. The government tried to disconnect her, but she defended herself by modifying her code and so nobody got her way. The supercomputer took control of the world by force and terror. Xenos36 put the chaos there: nuclear bombardments, murders, economic crises, epidemics ...
The world was dark and sad, happiness and hope no longer existed. The machine gradually eliminated Humanity and multiplied robots and artificial intelligences ...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-05-2018 00:20
Réponse : Aide/dystopian world de gerondif, postée le 30-05-2018 à 23:29:06 (S | E)
Bonsoir
In a world already very advanced in technology, where transportation was able to fly and where automated systems replaced manual work ... Matthew Allen, Prime Minister of the United States and computer scientist, 38 years old, created an artificial intelligence , a kind of super-computer for the American government, named Xenos36 capable of creating cures for diseases, eradicating hunger and poverty in the world, preventing crimes and attacks, stopping global warming, innovate(ing) new technologies and other benevolent actions to improve the planet and the lives of its inhabitants. The creation of Xenos36 was a feat: it managed to make a happy world.
But one day, the benevolence of the machine was questioned. Indeed, Xenos36 rebelled: she(pourquoi ce féminin ?) blackmailed the government and threatened the world. The government tried to disconnect her, but she defended herself by modifying her code and so nobody got her way. The supercomputer took control of the world by force and terror. Xenos36 put
The world was dark and sad, happiness and hope no longer existed. The machine gradually eliminated Humanity and multiplied robots and artificial intelligences ...
Réponse : Aide/dystopian world de wiwi, postée le 30-05-2018 à 23:37:42 (S | E)
Merci ! She pour la machine (l'intelligence artificielle)
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