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Message de maria02 posté le 09-09-2021 à 16:41:13 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Could you please see if this text is correct?
Thanks for any reply.
The story is about Shizuku, a 14 year-old girl, who studies in high School, and she is passionante about Reading, she is a real bookworm.
One day, Shizuku decided to follow her passion Like her Friend Seiji and start writing her first novel, instead of preparing for exams, her parents supported her to go ahead and assume responsability of this choice.
She went through this adventure, she struggled a lot and she finished by figuring out that she had to learn more about writing and to shapen her knowledge through Studying.
Message de maria02 posté le 09-09-2021 à 16:41:13 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Could you please see if this text is correct?
Thanks for any reply.
The story is about Shizuku, a 14 year-old girl, who studies in high School, and she is passionante about Reading, she is a real bookworm.
One day, Shizuku decided to follow her passion Like her Friend Seiji and start writing her first novel, instead of preparing for exams, her parents supported her to go ahead and assume responsability of this choice.
She went through this adventure, she struggled a lot and she finished by figuring out that she had to learn more about writing and to shapen her knowledge through Studying.
Réponse : Summary/aide de gerondif, postée le 09-09-2021 à 19:01:40 (S | E)
Bonjour
Erreurs en bleu
The story is about Shizuku, a 14 year-old girl, who studies in high School, and she is passionate about reading, she is a real bookworm.
One day, Shizuku decided (un présent irait aussi) to follow her passion Like her friend Seiji and to start writing her first novel, instead of preparing for exams,(point) her parents supported (un présent irait aussi) her
She went through this adventure, she struggled a lot and she finished by(français traduit, utiliser eventually + prétérit)(ou remplacer finished by par ended up + ing) figuring out that she had to learn more about writing and to sharpen her knowledge through studying.
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Réponse : Summary/aide de maria02, postée le 10-09-2021 à 02:14:26 (S | E)
Thank you so much!
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