Let's suggest/ 74- Taking it easy/ 20
Cours gratuits > Forum > Exercices du forum || En basMessage de here4u posté le 18-11-2024 à 23:20:12 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles (surtout qu’ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement. ) Cependant, je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pouvez répondre.
1. - You’re offered either a parachute jump, or massages at the local spa, or a meeting with your favourite singer ;
which would you choose and why?
2. - Has a person changed your life for the better (or for the worse)?
3. - In your opinion, what is the worst cowardice?
4. - What is your favourite Christmas tradition ?
Vous pouvez choisir 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois la première réponse corrigée au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !) le vendredi 29 novembre 2024 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's suggest/ 74- Taking it easy/ 20 de here4u, postée le 20-11-2024 à 12:18:01 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Here is our first ANSWER to Let's Suggest 74-20! Will you please give us your impressions (indications and suggestions from the 22nd of November.
ANSWER A: please, give us indications of possible mistakes and underline what is clumsy.
My favourite tradition of Christmas is all the decorum, that surrounds this day. Festivities, joy, all the preparations which are made 1 month in advance in honour of the Saviour's birth.
The whole town is lit up, and the shop windows were full of toys and bright decorations.Young children are busy writing their letters to Father Christmas, well written and without any spelling mistakes.
The evening of December 24th, we eat the turkey with chestnuts, and a Yule log, the whole
family is together around the Christmas tree. We finish the creche by putting up the figurine of the new born Jesus and we said our prayers. Before going to bed, we didn't forget to put our well-waxed boots and slippers in front of the fireplace. In the morning, the unwrapping of presents made us forget our breakfast.
This mix of pagan and religious traditions may seem strange. However, I get very disappointed when people ask the mayor to remove the creche from the village square. The most beautiful tradition of Christmas remains the message of peace and tolerance, which must be perpetuated.
Thank you to the writer and to future readers!
Réponse : Let's suggest/ 74- Taking it easy/ 20 de gerold, postée le 20-11-2024 à 13:02:02 (S | E)
Hello dears!
Here is our first ANSWER to Let's Suggest 74-20! Will you please give us your impressions (indications and suggestions from the 22nd of November.
ANSWER A: please, give us indications of possible mistakes and underline what is clumsy.
My indications:
My favourite tradition of Christmas is all the decorum, that surrounds this day. Festivities, joy, all the preparations which are made 1 month in advance in honour of the Saviour's birth (not really a sentence).
The whole town is lit up, and the shop windows were full of toys and bright decorations.Young children are busy writing their letters to Father Christmas, well written and without any spelling mistakes.
xx The evening of December 24th, we eat the turkey with chestnuts, and a Yule log, the whole family is together around the Christmas tree. We finish the creche by putting up the figurine of the new born Jesus and we said our prayers. Before going to bed, we didn't forget to put our well-waxed boots and slippers in front of the fireplace. In the morning, the unwrapping of xx presents made us forget our breakfast.
This mix of pagan and religious traditions may seem strange. However, I get very disappointed when people ask the mayor to remove the creche from the village square. The most beautiful tradition of Christmas remains the message of peace and tolerance, which must be perpetuated.
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