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Message de cemoi posté le 12-08-2009 à 19:51:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, est ce que vous pourriez corriger mes erreurs (modèle de lettre de motivation):
"Dear Mr ***
I am student in a French Engineering School and majors I have chosen are orientated around instrumentation devices.
In September I will be graduated with a French “Diplome d'Ingénieur” equivalent to best MEng and I am looking for a graduate job which could evolve to a position with responsibilities.
I am specifically interested in your job offer because I am attracted by the development and design of electronic devices and particularly for instrumentation.
Indeed in this area, innovation is constant because of the growing need for precision and miniaturization.
I am also significantly attracted by the global aspect of your company and the possibility to evolve to an international career.
During my studies, I learned how to work efficiently but rigorously and how to reach an objective.
In my previous job experience I learned how to focus on the clients and to react in difficult situations.
Furthermore, at School, I have already realised several electronics projects.
I hope your company will trust me and let me show my abilities.
I would be available from ***
I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
yours faithfully"
Merci !
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Modifié par bridg le 12-08-2009 19:53
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Message de cemoi posté le 12-08-2009 à 19:51:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, est ce que vous pourriez corriger mes erreurs (modèle de lettre de motivation):
"Dear Mr ***
I am student in a French Engineering School and majors I have chosen are orientated around instrumentation devices.
In September I will be graduated with a French “Diplome d'Ingénieur” equivalent to best MEng and I am looking for a graduate job which could evolve to a position with responsibilities.
I am specifically interested in your job offer because I am attracted by the development and design of electronic devices and particularly for instrumentation.
Indeed in this area, innovation is constant because of the growing need for precision and miniaturization.
I am also significantly attracted by the global aspect of your company and the possibility to evolve to an international career.
During my studies, I learned how to work efficiently but rigorously and how to reach an objective.
In my previous job experience I learned how to focus on the clients and to react in difficult situations.
Furthermore, at School, I have already realised several electronics projects.
I hope your company will trust me and let me show my abilities.
I would be available from ***
I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
yours faithfully"
Merci !
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Modifié par bridg le 12-08-2009 19:53
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