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Message de elise01 posté le 16-10-2009 à 16:40:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, voici la partie expression de mon DM d'anglais, pourriez-vous svp m'aider dans la correction, voici la question: The media (television, newspaper, the Internet...) do not always respect people's sufferings and private lives. Do you share this view? Give examples.
Sometimes, people aren't respect by the newspaper for example magazines publishing photos or article which talking about the private life of well-known people. When these informations are true I think it isn't a problem but when they're false the media must have published for the respect of these persons. They want to inform and sell informations even though they aren't respect the persons like paparazzi who took photos of Segolene Royalon the beach and published them on the people's newspaper, Here her private life isn't respect and she used the jusctice to punish the journalist. It isn't dramatic because it's just photos of her in bad swimming but for the most gravity stuff like Outrau's stuff it's more dramatic. Journalist by the media like internet or television told person commished rape on people, the have judged and 4 years later are learned that they was innocent. Without the intervention of the media, it may have been different, people accused in this in,vestigation have suffered because rape is very serious in our society. In this example, media didn't respect these persons and their words may have influenced justice I didn't share these action like this because what the media have told has fat consequences on the psychology of the people.
Merci, Elise.
Réponse: Media and private lives de elise01, postée le 17-10-2009 à 11:33:45 (S | E)
Voici déjà une petite correction de ma part, pourriez-vs svp m'aider dans les éventuelles erreurs qu'il doit rester =)
Sometimes, people aren't respect by the newspaper for example magazines publishing photos or article which talking about the private life of well-known people. If this uncountable is true I think it isn't a problem but when they're false the media shouldn’t publish for the respect of these persons. They want to inform and sell uncountable even though they aren't respect the persons like paparazzi who took photos of Segolene Royal on the beach and published them on the people's newspaper. Here her private life isn't respect and she used the justice to punish the journalist. It isn't dramatic because it's just photos of her in bad swimming but for the most gravity stuff like Outrau's stuff it's more dramatic. Journalist by the media like internet or television told person commished rape on people, they have judged and 4 years later they are learned that they were innocent. Without the intervention of the media, it may have been different; people accused in this investigation have suffered because rape is very serious in our society. In this example, media didn't respect these persons and their words may have influenced justice I didn't share these action like this because what the media have told has fat consequences on the psychology of the people.
Merci, Elise.
Réponse: Media and private lives de seb06000, postée le 17-10-2009 à 11:48:05 (S | E)
bonjour,
voici ce qu'il reste à corriger:
'Sometimes, people aren't respect (il faut l'adjectif) by the newspaper (marque du pluriel) for example magazines publishing photos or article (pluriel) which talking (il manque un auxiliaire pour le present en ING) about the private life of well-known people. If this uncountable is true I think it isn't a problem but when they're false (voc) the media shouldn’t publish for the respect of these persons. They want to inform and sell uncountable (sens?) even though they aren't respect(adjectif) the persons like paparazzi who took photos of Segolene Royal on the beach and published them on the people's newspaper (voc) . Here her private life isn't respect (adjectif) and she used the justice to punish the journalist. It isn't dramatic (faux ami, cela ne marche pas ici) because it's just photos of her in bad swimming (sens?) but for the most gravity stuff like Outrau (ortho)'s stuff it's more dramatic (idem). Journalist (expression à revoir) by the media like internet or television told person commished (voc) rape( transformez le en verbe, cela sera plus simple) on people, they have judged (marque du passif à remettre) and 4 years later they are learned (voc) that they were innocent. Without the intervention of the media, it may have been different; people accused in this investigation have suffered because rape is very serious in our society. In this example, media didn't respect these persons and their words may have influenced justice I didn't share these action (marque du pluriel) like this because what the media have told has fat (voc) consequences on the psychology of the people.
Amicalement
sebastien
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Modifié par seb06000 le 17-10-2009 11:51
Réponse: Media and private lives de elise01, postée le 17-10-2009 à 13:41:16 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup, voici ma correction retse t-il des erreurs ou puis-je la recopier?
Sometimes, people aren't respectable by the newspapers for example magazines publishing photos or articles which are talking about the private life of well-known people. If this uncountable is true I think it isn't a problem but when they are fake the media shouldn’t publish for the respect of these persons. They want to inform and sell information even though they aren't respectable the persons like paparazzi who took photos of Segolene Royal on the beach and published them on the newspaper. Here her private life isn't respectable and she used the justice to punish the journalist. It isn't dramatically because it's just photos of her without clothes but for the most gravity stuff like Outreau 's stuff it's more dramatically. The journalist by the media like internet or television told person raped people, they have judged (marque du passif à remettre, je ne vois pas (enfin plus) ce qu’est le passif) and 4 years later they are knew that they were innocent. Without the intervention of the media, it may have been different; people accused in this investigation have suffered because rape is very serious in our society. In this example, media didn't respect these persons and their words may have influenced justice I didn't share these actions like this because what the media have told has big consequences on the psychology of the people.
Merci Elise.
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