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Message de alphafifi posté le 27-10-2009 à 15:41:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pourriez vous me corriger s'il vous plait pour mon expression écrite ? merci d'avance !
C'est aussi une façon de se sentir plus mature et indépendant. A propos des de la anglais : raffole t-il du thé ? c'est vrai ?
Y'a t-il plusieurs fêtes de garden et quelques café en Angleterre ?
Ici il fait beau aujourd'hui . Et à Londres , quel temps fait-il ? Y'a t-il de la pluie ?
J'espère qu'a mon arrivé je n'aurai pas trop le mal du pays car ce n'est pas facile de se séparer de sa famille , de ma meilleur amie et de mon pays .
Cependant c'est le risque à prendre quand on veut devenir plus autonome .
This is also a way to feel more mature and independance . What about English people : Do they love tea ? It's right ? Are there many garden fetes , village cricket and theme pubs at Britain ? Here, the weather is fine today ! And at London is there rain ? I hope i will not be homesick when arrive because it's not easy to separate of my family, my closed friend and my country. However, is the adventure when someboby want to being more antonomous .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-10-2009 21:05
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Message de alphafifi posté le 27-10-2009 à 15:41:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pourriez vous me corriger s'il vous plait pour mon expression écrite ? merci d'avance !
C'est aussi une façon de se sentir plus mature et indépendant. A propos des de la anglais : raffole t-il du thé ? c'est vrai ?
Y'a t-il plusieurs fêtes de garden et quelques café en Angleterre ?
Ici il fait beau aujourd'hui . Et à Londres , quel temps fait-il ? Y'a t-il de la pluie ?
J'espère qu'a mon arrivé je n'aurai pas trop le mal du pays car ce n'est pas facile de se séparer de sa famille , de ma meilleur amie et de mon pays .
Cependant c'est le risque à prendre quand on veut devenir plus autonome .
This is also a way to feel more mature and independance . What about English people : Do they love tea ? It's right ? Are there many garden fetes , village cricket and theme pubs at Britain ? Here, the weather is fine today ! And at London is there rain ? I hope i will not be homesick when arrive because it's not easy to separate of my family, my closed friend and my country. However, is the adventure when someboby want to being more antonomous .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-10-2009 21:05
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Réponse: Correction/feel more mature de alphafifi, postée le 27-10-2009 à 20:04:24 (S | E)
svp une petite aide ? merci d'avance !
Réponse: Correction/feel more mature de lucile83, postée le 27-10-2009 à 21:04:29 (S | E)
Hello,
Les fautes sont en rouge;
This is also a way to feel more mature and independance . What about English people : Do they love tea ? It's right ? Are there many garden fetes , village cricket and theme pubs at Britain ? Here, the weather is fine today ! And at London is there rain ? I hope i will not be homesick when arrive because it's not easy to separate of my family, my closed friend and my country. However, is the adventure when someboby want to being more antonomous .
Best wishes.
Réponse: Correction/feel more mature de alphafifi, postée le 27-10-2009 à 21:45:25 (S | E)
This is also a way to feel more mature and independent . What about English people : Do they love tea ? That right ? Are there many garden party , village Cricket and many pubs at Britain ? Here, the weather is fine today ! And in London is it raining ? I hope I will not be homesick during my arrival because it's not easy to separate of my family, my closed friend and my country. However, is the risk when someone want to become more self-working.
voila j'espère qure c'est mieux ?
Merci d'avance pour votre aide !
Réponse: Correction/feel more mature de lucile83, postée le 27-10-2009 à 21:53:50 (S | E)
Hi,
This is also a way to feel more mature and independent . What about English people : Do they love tea ? That right ? Are there many garden party , village Cricket and many pubs at Britain ? Here, the weather is fine today ! And in London is it raining ? I hope I will not be homesick during my arrival because it's not easy to separate of my family, my closed friend and my country. However,this is the risk when someone want to become more self-working.
Bye!
Si quelqu'un d'autre veut vérifier encore je n'y vois aucun inconvénient !
Réponse: Correction/feel more mature de alphafifi, postée le 27-10-2009 à 22:05:50 (S | E)
This is also a way to feel more mature and independent . What about English people : Do they love tea ? That true ? Are there many garden party , village Cricket and many pubs in Britain ? Here, the weather is fine today ! And in London is it raining ? I hope I will not be homesick during my destination because it's not easy to separate from my family, my best friend and my country. However,this is the risk when someone would to become more self-working.
voila je pense avoir corrigé mes fautes ! Pouvez vous vérifier svp et ensuite promis je vous laisse tranquille
? merci d'avance !Réponse: Correction/feel more mature de lucile83, postée le 27-10-2009 à 22:41:45 (S | E)
Hi,
This is also a way to feel more mature and independent . What about English people : Do they love tea ? Is that true ? Are there many garden party , village Cricket and many pubs in Britain ? Here, the weather is fine today ! And in London is it raining ? I hope I will not be homesick during my stay because it's not easy to separate from my family, my best friend and my country. However,this is the risk when someone
Fine work !
Good night
Réponse: Correction/feel more mature de alphafifi, postée le 27-10-2009 à 22:45:17 (S | E)
THANKK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:GOOD NIGHT !!!!
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