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Correction/ Globalisation
Message de nadie posté le 15-11-2009 à 20:33:41 (S | E | F)
Hello,
DEFINITION
Globalisation decribes ongoing process which the regional economies ,sociéties and cultures have become integrated through a globe-spanning network of communication and execution
INTRODUCTION
Each country have their own history and culture.so we think globalisation could give divergents and fears.today,globalisation will be the fact to have the unique culture but i think that each country would to keep their own culture.it could provoke the conflits between countries and then they can°t prepare to change their culture.
DEVELOPPEMENT
We can develop in differents way:
On the one hand, i think that globalisation don°t profit of all countries the same,the exchange are unequal.
The rich countries fix the prices(prizes) of row material which is the first ones who result mainly from developing country. The relation are not unbalance, because The multinationals win a lot of money by transforming row material bought cheap from the poor countries.
So we can speak about comparative advantages for the rich countries.
This problem of comparative advantage reside in the fact that the multinationals of the North import row materials in the lower prices, transform into industrial products that they export in developing countries in the more expensive price .it raises them a great profit.
We could talk about the less control in frontiere about GMO( genetically modified organism), because with the globalisation, we promote the free exchange ,so products are changed freely without real controls.with the GMO we don°t know today their effects on the organism.it develops free circulation for example,the migratory flow whose increase in the European union and in the USA.
In the second hand, we could talk about protectionism and free exchange.
We could explain that across the example for the china textile.
In 2005 France has introduced the quota to the china textile. It was the way to protect the french textile.
To conclude we can say that globalisation is a one phenomenon which is maked by rich countries et for them.
je souhaiterais avoir quelques correctionsSVP s'il vous plaît, car mon anglais reste très basique.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-11-2009 20:41
Message de nadie posté le 15-11-2009 à 20:33:41 (S | E | F)
Hello,
DEFINITION
Globalisation decribes ongoing process which the regional economies ,sociéties and cultures have become integrated through a globe-spanning network of communication and execution
INTRODUCTION
Each country have their own history and culture.so we think globalisation could give divergents and fears.today,globalisation will be the fact to have the unique culture but i think that each country would to keep their own culture.it could provoke the conflits between countries and then they can°t prepare to change their culture.
DEVELOPPEMENT
We can develop in differents way:
On the one hand, i think that globalisation don°t profit of all countries the same,the exchange are unequal.
The rich countries fix the prices(prizes) of row material which is the first ones who result mainly from developing country. The relation are not unbalance, because The multinationals win a lot of money by transforming row material bought cheap from the poor countries.
So we can speak about comparative advantages for the rich countries.
This problem of comparative advantage reside in the fact that the multinationals of the North import row materials in the lower prices, transform into industrial products that they export in developing countries in the more expensive price .it raises them a great profit.
We could talk about the less control in frontiere about GMO( genetically modified organism), because with the globalisation, we promote the free exchange ,so products are changed freely without real controls.with the GMO we don°t know today their effects on the organism.it develops free circulation for example,the migratory flow whose increase in the European union and in the USA.
In the second hand, we could talk about protectionism and free exchange.
We could explain that across the example for the china textile.
In 2005 France has introduced the quota to the china textile. It was the way to protect the french textile.
To conclude we can say that globalisation is a one phenomenon which is maked by rich countries et for them.
je souhaiterais avoir quelques corrections
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-11-2009 20:41
Réponse: Correction/ Globalisation de cecil_ward, postée le 16-11-2009 à 12:44:28 (S | E)
"globalisation describes _the_ ongoing process" need an article here (probably "the")
Réponse: Correction/ Globalisation de cecil_ward, postée le 16-11-2009 à 12:45:15 (S | E)
"each country have" needs to be "has" singular after "each"
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