bonjour,

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Good Morning All!
We’re going to explain you our project called “Stop Pollution, We’ll reap as we sow”.
We have chosen this title because it’s exactly what will happen if we don’t reduce pollution.

As you can see in the poster we made, the schema( calque du français) represents all the problems that could result if we continue to use all the time (position de all the time, le COD est toujours accolé au verbe) our car, instead of going by bus or by walk. For example, instead of going by car to go shopping, go by walk! Cars aren’t good for the planet.

First, petrol takes the boat to come (mal dit). But sometimes, there can be accidents, like the sinking of Erika in 1999, with a heavy cargo of around 10,000 tons of fuel oil. It is considered ( il manque un adverbe) one of the greatest environmental disasters in the world. But this is not the only consequence of this sinking; a big oil slick damaged all the shore( all + pluriel si dénombrable) and killed loads of gulls.
But when petrol arrives in destination, it must be refined and industries reject lots of main gases.
After that stage, consumers use the fuel oil created to put in their cars, and it’s tragic : cars reject lots of exhausts (invariable) fumes, people who want to go for a walk with their children breathe it, after that they can have illnesses...
IT POLLUTES THE EARTH AND OUR LUNGS!

Government (il manque un déterminant) invented an ecological tax:
People who buy a SUV will pay more than people who want to buy a little car who (erreur de relatif) reject (conjugaison) a little of CO2. In about 2weeks (in a fortnight), leaderships (voc) of all the countries of the world will meet in Copenhagen to have a conference about climate. For this, celebrities have created a free song called “Beds are burning”.


Voilà votre anglais semble très bon!

courage

sebastien