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Message de valdu08 posté le 21-12-2009 à 15:25:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Bon voilà j'ai une lettre de motivation à envoyer.
J'aimerais savoir si j'ai fait des erreurs d'orthographe.
Merci.
Dear Madam, dear Mister,
I’m currently in the last year of my degree course in lycée xxxx and I would like to become a Young European ambassador.
First of all, I’ve to say that since the beginning of this Comenius Project I’m very motivated. I feel like this expérience is going to greatly help me in my future studies and above all in my Professional life.
Next year I hope to enter in a science politics institute and I’m certain that if I participate to this project, it will give me essential skills and knowledge that will become huge trumps for my future.
Over and above all as a passionnate of history, geography and economics subjects I couldn’t avoid to send my application letter.
Furthermore, the courses that I can performa at lycée xxx enable me to understand better the European problem. Indeed, since the tenth grade, two hours a week, as part of the European section, I keep up history and English lessons in british language.
As a consequence, when I’ve learnt that we were going to follow the Comenius programm, « Unity in diversity », with Mr it was for me a normal continuation. So, each week with our economics teacher, we study documents and speak about « Immigration, economic, social and cultural aspects » on the European continent. It prepares us to tackle the difficult European subject more easily.
To conclude, I feel totally motivated and mentally ready to represent my establishment next April in Verone.
Hoping thaht my candidature retain all your attention, please accept the assurances of my highest considération.
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Edited by lucile83 on 21-12-2009 15:25
+ titre + forum
Message de valdu08 posté le 21-12-2009 à 15:25:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Bon voilà j'ai une lettre de motivation à envoyer.
J'aimerais savoir si j'ai fait des erreurs d'orthographe.
Merci.
Dear Madam, dear Mister,
I’m currently in the last year of my degree course in lycée xxxx and I would like to become a Young European ambassador.
First of all, I’ve to say that since the beginning of this Comenius Project I’m very motivated. I feel like this expérience is going to greatly help me in my future studies and above all in my Professional life.
Next year I hope to enter in a science politics institute and I’m certain that if I participate to this project, it will give me essential skills and knowledge that will become huge trumps for my future.
Over and above all as a passionnate of history, geography and economics subjects I couldn’t avoid to send my application letter.
Furthermore, the courses that I can performa at lycée xxx enable me to understand better the European problem. Indeed, since the tenth grade, two hours a week, as part of the European section, I keep up history and English lessons in british language.
As a consequence, when I’ve learnt that we were going to follow the Comenius programm, « Unity in diversity », with Mr it was for me a normal continuation. So, each week with our economics teacher, we study documents and speak about « Immigration, economic, social and cultural aspects » on the European continent. It prepares us to tackle the difficult European subject more easily.
To conclude, I feel totally motivated and mentally ready to represent my establishment next April in Verone.
Hoping thaht my candidature retain all your attention, please accept the assurances of my highest considération.
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Edited by lucile83 on 21-12-2009 15:25
+ titre + forum
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