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Message de labergeamel posté le 13-01-2010 à 17:49:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous!
Voilà, j'ai besoin d'aide pour faire corriger mon cv en anglais pour obtenir l'emploi de mes rêves! Je vous remercie infiniment pour votre aide!
Merci!
Amélie
Career Objective
To obtain employment to develop my skills in international development
Highlights of Qualifications
Ability to work independently and within a team context
Good cross-cultural communication and interpersonal skills
Excellent communication skills; fluent in French and in English
Work Experience
Substitute teacher September 2009 – present
Commission scolaire de l’Estuaire
Baie-Comeau, Québec
-Teach a school class when the regular teacher is unavailable
English teacher April - May 2009
Mianzhu high school
Mianzhu, Sichuan, China
-Prepare lesson plans
-Teach English to speaker of other language
High School Teacher January – June 2008
Commission scolaire de l'Estuaire
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
-Teach to high school students
-Teaching field: ethics and religion
Bartender and Barista June – October 2007
Mezz Café, Cardrona Ski Resort
Wanaka, New Zealand
-Serve meals and focused on quality customer service
Waitress
The Old Spaghetti Factory July 2006 – March 2007
Banff, Alberta
-Serve meals and focused on quality customer service
Desk Supervisor July 2006 – March 2007
The Old Spaghetti Factory
Banff, Alberta
-Supervise a team of 15 to 20 employees
-Responsible for scheduling and training
Pesticide Inspector May – August 2005
Environment Minister of Québec
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
-Inspect company selling pesticide and made sure they respect legislations
-Informe people working with pesticide of the consequences on the ecosystem
Administrative Assistant May – August 2003
Tourist development board of Franquelin
Franquelin, Quebec
-Manage a Forestry Museum and its restaurant
-Responsible for schedules, payroll, dealing with complicated situations, ordering supplies, payments and kitchen help
EDUCATION
TEFL Certificate Teach English as a Foreign Language January – April 2008
Online course
Law Studies January – June 2006
Catholic University of Leuven
Louvain-la-Neuve, Belgium
Baccalaureate in Law September 2003- December 2005
Sherbrooke University
Sherbrooke,Quebec
College Diplomas in Social Sciences September 2001 – May 2003
Baie-Comeau College
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
VOLUNTEERING
L’ouvre-boîte culturel September 2009 - present
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
-Nonprofit organization that aims the promotion of arts and culture.
Save the Dugong December 2008
Neil Island, India
-Organization that aims the preservation of environment.
SECMOL July – August 2008
Ladakh, India
-Teach English to students range from 17 to 21 years old to improve their English level.
Amnesty International 2002-2005
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
-Organization that fights for human rights.
Réponse: Aide correction cv en anglais de gerondif, postée le 13-01-2010 à 18:32:57 (S | E)
bonsoir,
there isn't much to correct, I just wonder if it is usual to describe activities with an infinitive without to, what you do when you say:
"-Teach a school-class when the regular teacher is unavailable."
I am not a cv specialist.....
Career Objective
To obtain employment to develop my skills in international development
Highlights of Qualifications
Ability to work independently and within a team context
Good cross-cultural communication and interpersonal skills
Excellent communication skills; fluent in French and in English
Work Experience
Substitute teacher September 2009 – present
Commission scolaire de l’Estuaire
Baie-Comeau, Québec
-Teach a school-class when the regular teacher is unavailable
English teacher April - May 2009
Mianzhu high school
Mianzhu, Sichuan, China
-Prepare lesson plans
-Teach English to speaker of other language(foreign speakers)
High School Teacher January – June 2008
Commission scolaire de l'Estuaire
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
-Teach to high school students
-Teaching field: ethics and religion
Bartender and Barista June – October 2007
Mezz Café, Cardrona Ski Resort
Wanaka, New Zealand
-Serve meals and focus(verbe sur le même plan que "serve") on quality customer service
Waitress
The Old Spaghetti Factory July 2006 – March 2007
Banff, Alberta
-Serve meals and focused on quality customer service
Desk Supervisor July 2006 – March 2007
The Old Spaghetti Factory
Banff, Alberta
-Supervise a team of 15 to 20 employees
-Responsible for scheduling and training
Pesticide Inspector May – August 2005
Environment Minister of Québec
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
-Inspect company selling pesticide(s) and made sure they respect legislations
-Informe people working with pesticide(s) of the consequences on the ecosystem
Administrative Assistant May – August 2003
Tourist development board of Franquelin
Franquelin, Quebec
-Manage a Forestry Museum and its restaurant
-Responsible for schedules, payroll, dealing with complicated situations, ordering supplies, payments and kitchen help
EDUCATION
TEFL Certificate Teach English as a Foreign Language January – April 2008
Online course
Law Studies January – June 2006
Catholic University of Leuven
Louvain-la-Neuve, Belgium
Baccalaureate in Law September 2003- December 2005
Sherbrooke University
Sherbrooke,Quebec
College Diplomas in Social Sciences September 2001 – May 2003
Baie-Comeau College
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
VOLUNTEERING
L’ouvre-boîte culturel September 2009 - present
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
-Nonprofit organization (aiming at)that aims the promotion of arts and culture.
Save the Dugong December 2008
Neil Island, India
-Organization that aims the preservation of environment.
SECMOL July – August 2008
Ladakh, India
-Teach English to students range(ranging) from 17 to 21 years old to improve their English level.
Amnesty International 2002-2005
Baie-Comeau, Quebec
-Organization that fights for human rights.
Bonne chance, Good luck !
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