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Mes phrases sont-elles correctes?
Message de gouldi posté le 20-10-2010 à 18:51:29 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Mes phrases sont-elles correctes?
Par avance merci
Elisa

I usually wake up in the morning at seven O'Clock and I get dressed.
I have breakfast and I always brush my teeth.
I never go to school by bus,I always go to school by car
I seldom go back home by bus.
I sometimes have lessons at eight O'Clock to five O'Clock.
I have lunch at twelve O'Clock or thirteen O'Clock.
I always do the homework after the school.
I always get undressed and I have shower.
I often have dinner and I brush my teeth at quarter to eight.
I usually watch TV and go to bed.

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Réponse: Mes phrases sont-elles correctes? de gerondif, postée le 20-10-2010 à 20:05:19 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
I usually wake up in the morning at seven O'Clock and I get dressed. (minuscule)
I have breakfast and I always brush my teeth.
I never go to school by bus,I always go to school by car
I seldom go back home by bus.
I sometimes(pourquoi quelquefois ? avec des leçons régulières, j'aurais mis habituellement) have lessons at(de, pas à 8 h) eight O'Clock to five O'Clock.
I have lunch at twelve O'Clock or thirteen O'Clock.(les anglais ne fonctionnent pas sur 24 heures)
I always do the(mes devoirs) homework after the school.
I always get undressed and I have ** shower.(manque un article)
I often have dinner (bizarre, ce often sans heure derrière) and I brush my teeth at (*)quarter to eight.
I usually watch TV and go to bed.

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Réponse: Mes phrases sont-elles correctes? de may, postée le 22-10-2010 à 02:40:20 (S | E)

Bonsoir,

Pour suivre la correction de gerondif:

I usually wake up in the morning at seven O'Clock and I get dressed. (minuscule)

I have lunch at twelve O'Clock or thirteen O'Clock.(les anglais ne fonctionnent pas sur 24 heures)

I usually watch TV and go to bed.

C'est mieux de dire comme suit:

I usually wake up at ....in the morning....

I have lunch at noon.....

I usually watch TV then go to bed

Bonne nuit

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Réponse: Mes phrases sont-elles correctes? de iamchristine, postée le 22-10-2010 à 07:18:24 (S | E)
Hello G.,

It would be appropriate to place a semi-colon after "I never go to school by bus".

The word "O'Clock" looks strange to me; maybe I don't see it in written form very often. The spellchecker is highlighting it on my desktop.

You use 'and' as a conjunction in most of the sentences. Are you being encouraged to use others? Where there is a sequence in time, it would make more sense to use words like 'then' (which has already been suggested), 'before' or 'and afterward'.

Hope this helps,

c
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-10-2010 08:33

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Réponse: Mes phrases sont-elles correctes? de may, postée le 23-10-2010 à 01:40:58 (S | E)
Bonsoir,


It would be appropriate to place a semi-colon after "I never go to school by bus".

Also to be more precise, a space in between...Voilà

Bonne nuit,

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