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Message de miko7 posté le 05-01-2012 à 21:08:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me dire s'il vous plaît s'il y a des fautes et si oui lesquelles?
Merci d'avance pour votre aide.
Voici le texte que j'ai fait (présentation)
I'm going to explain the causes and Why the sea level rises, the sea level rises because the melting of ice caps leads to a reduction in albedo (surface reflectivity , Who allow for greater absorption of solar radiation ). More solar radiation is absorbed and the warming will accelerate and cause the melting of ice caps and it's also due to thermal expansion due to the green house effect and Global warming.
Estimates put the net loss of ice is between 82 and 224 cubic kilometers per year and projected that thermal expansion will increase the sea level rise of few centimeters and may have important consequences.
For STOP the global warming and sea level rise we should do some things for example :
We should limit the air pollution .
We should protect the coastline for limit the damages
We shouldn’t pollute
We shouldn’t buy houses in risk areas
We can contribute to this global cause with personal actions.
We should limit CO2 emissions
If we do this We can decrease the global warming and sea level rise
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-01-2012 21:12
Message de miko7 posté le 05-01-2012 à 21:08:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me dire s'il vous plaît s'il y a des fautes et si oui lesquelles?
Merci d'avance pour votre aide.
Voici le texte que j'ai fait (présentation)
I'm going to explain the causes and Why the sea level rises, the sea level rises because the melting of ice caps leads to a reduction in albedo (surface reflectivity , Who allow for greater absorption of solar radiation ). More solar radiation is absorbed and the warming will accelerate and cause the melting of ice caps and it's also due to thermal expansion due to the green house effect and Global warming.
Estimates put the net loss of ice is between 82 and 224 cubic kilometers per year and projected that thermal expansion will increase the sea level rise of few centimeters and may have important consequences.
For STOP the global warming and sea level rise we should do some things for example :
We should limit the air pollution .
We should protect the coastline for limit the damages
We shouldn’t pollute
We shouldn’t buy houses in risk areas
We can contribute to this global cause with personal actions.
We should limit CO2 emissions
If we do this We can decrease the global warming and sea level rise
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-01-2012 21:12
Réponse: Correction/ sea level de dsmith, postée le 06-01-2012 à 05:34:56 (S | E)
Bonjour! Voici quelques corrections:
I'm going to explain the causes and Why the sea level rises, the sea level rises because the melting of ice caps leads to a reduction in albedo (surface reflectivity , Who allow for greater absorption of solar radiation ). More solar radiation is absorbed and the warming will accelerate and cause the melting of ice caps and it's also due to thermal expansion due to the green house effect and Global warming.
Estimates put the net loss of ice
For STOP the global warming and sea level rise we should do some things for example :
We should limit the air pollution .
We should protect the coastline for limit the damages
We shouldn’t pollute
We shouldn’t buy houses in risk areas
We can contribute to this global cause with personal actions.
We should limit CO2 emissions
If we do this We can decrease
...causes of why...
The sea level rises... c'est une nouvelle phrase.
Who allow - who is used for people - mieux: which allows...
projected - non, ça doit être le présent
In order to STOP...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-01-2012 07:51
Merci de participer mais merci aussi de ne pas donner la correction toute faite.
Réponse: Correction/ sea level de miko7, postée le 06-01-2012 à 06:42:11 (S | E)
merci je n'ai pas pu dire merci avant, je dormais.-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 06-01-2012 07:49
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