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Message de bem2012 posté le 15-01-2012 à 19:43:47 (S | E | F)
Salut ! Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger les fautes que j'ai faites dans ce paragraphe , s'il vous plaît .
Merci bien.
Robots are one of the amazing inventions that men use recently . They made our life easier , more comfortable and interesting . These devices are able to do several things . They could cook all the meals easily without any help . The can make operations in hospitals , that may help doctors in their work . Robots are able to work in factories , too . This might well produce more quantities of goods .
In the future , we'll see new robots who will help us to do our home work . We'll also marry with robots and we'll have robot babies... I'm sure because all is possible with the science but this is so far .
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Modifié par bem2012 le 15-01-2012 19:46
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-01-2012 19:51
Message de bem2012 posté le 15-01-2012 à 19:43:47 (S | E | F)
J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger les fautes que j'ai faites dans ce paragraphe , s'il vous plaît .
Merci bien.
Robots are one of the amazing inventions that men use recently . They made our life easier , more comfortable and interesting . These devices are able to do several things . They could cook all the meals easily without any help . The can make operations in hospitals , that may help doctors in their work . Robots are able to work in factories , too . This might well produce more quantities of goods .
In the future , we'll see new robots who will help us to do our home work . We'll also marry with robots and we'll have robot babies... I'm sure because all is possible with the science but this is so far .
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Modifié par bem2012 le 15-01-2012 19:46
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-01-2012 19:51
Réponse: Robots /essai de notrepere, postée le 15-01-2012 à 20:12:02 (S | E)
BonjourRobots are one of the amazing inventions that men (1) use recently (2) . They made (3) our life (4) easier , more comfortable and interesting . These devices are able to do several things . They could cook all the meals easily without any help . They can make (5) operations in hospitals , that may help doctors in their work . Robots are able to work in factories , too . This might well produce more quantities of goods .
In the future , we'll see new robots who will help us to do our homework . We'll also marry with robots and we'll have robot babies...
I'm sure because all (6) is possible with the science but this is so far 
. (1) Seulement les hommes ? 'we', 'people' vaut mieux
(2) Un autre mot conviendrait mieux comme 'de nos jours', 'aujourd'hui', 'maintenant'
(3) Pourquoi au passé ?
(4) accorde ; 'our' est pluriel
(5) faire = do/make ; il faut choisir l'autre
(6) 'anything' vaut mieux
En rouge = inutile ; à supprimer
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Modifié par notrepere le 15-01-2012 20:13
Réponse: Robots /essai de bem2012, postée le 15-01-2012 à 21:03:44 (S | E)
Merci bien
J'ai essayé de corriger .
Robots are one of the amazing inventions that people use today . They make our life easier , more comfortable and interesting . These devices are able to do several things . They could cook all the meals easily without any help . They can make ? operations in hospitals , that may help doctors in their work . Robots are able to work in factories , too . This might well produce more quantities of goods .
In the future , we'll see new robots who will help us to do our home work . We'll also marry robots and we'll have robot babies... I'm sure because anything is possible with science .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-01-2012 08:37
Réponse: Robots /essai de notrepere, postée le 16-01-2012 à 05:12:08 (S | E)
HelloThey can make ? operations in hospitals
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