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Correction/Death cigarette
Message de joseph01 posté le 15-01-2012 à 20:15:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
quelqu'un pourrait-ilsvpl s'il vous plaît, corriger l'orthographe de ce texte?
Merci pour vos réponses.
He smoked since he was 11 years old and he had health problems at 30 years old, he was hospitalized.
One day at a bar in Los Angeles he had the idea to launch his mark of cigarette, Death Cigarette .
He said that people who buy Death Cigarette, will show: I smoke and I know I’m killing myself.
BJ Cunningham also denounces the hypocrisy of the government, because the only reason that it authorizes the cigarette is economic.
Contrary to tobacco industry who try to give a better image of tobacco by sponsoring sports for example, he says that people who buy Death Cigarette, show: I smoke and I know I’m killing myself.
There is two points :
- The first is the hypocrisy of the government and big company that I don’t like it.
- But the second point that is positive for my point of view, is that help to prevent new smokers.
And I approve the ban to smoke in public place as restaurants by respect for those who do not smoke
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-01-2012 21:50
Message de joseph01 posté le 15-01-2012 à 20:15:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
quelqu'un pourrait-il
Merci pour vos réponses.
He smoked since he was 11 years old and he had health problems at 30 years old, he was hospitalized.
One day at a bar in Los Angeles he had the idea to launch his mark of cigarette, Death Cigarette .
He said that people who buy Death Cigarette, will show: I smoke and I know I’m killing myself.
BJ Cunningham also denounces the hypocrisy of the government, because the only reason that it authorizes the cigarette is economic.
Contrary to tobacco industry who try to give a better image of tobacco by sponsoring sports for example, he says that people who buy Death Cigarette, show: I smoke and I know I’m killing myself.
There is two points :
- The first is the hypocrisy of the government and big company that I don’t like it.
- But the second point that is positive for my point of view, is that help to prevent new smokers.
And I approve the ban to smoke in public place as restaurants by respect for those who do not smoke
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-01-2012 21:50
Réponse: Correction/Death cigarette de lucile83, postée le 15-01-2012 à 21:50:22 (S | E)
Hello,
Vous allez jouer souvent à poster et supprimer un topic? merci de penser au temps que je passe à le lire et corriger les fautes de présentation.
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