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Message de lilimouss94 posté le 14-02-2012 à 21:16:35 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je dois faire quelques "simples" phrases de thème en utilisant le Past Perfect, le Past simple ou le Present Perfect. Seulement je ne suis pas sûr d'avoir bien employé ces temps donc je voulais un peu savoir si c'était plus au moins bons...
Merci et bonne soirée!
- Yesterday, I bought this dress, it cost me expansive but it was the last of the store.
- There was many holes in my garden since moles have dug a tunnel.
- I had been doing my homework since 2 hours when Paul arrived to going to the cinema.
- When I was younger, I drew flowers all the time because I wanted become a florist.
- When I was a child, I dreamt to become a famous actress because I was really into theatre.
- Since my mother drank much coffee every day, she has been more nervous and she can't sleep.
- I have driven my new car since I got my license.
- It was the first time I had cut tomatoes to help my mom make dinner.
- Last week, Martin and his brother Maxim came at my home for my birthday and I was happy because it was 3 years since we had not seen.
- I had already chosen to live in Africa when my mom implored me to stay in Belgium.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-02-2012 21:25
Réponse: Temps du passé/aide de gerondif, postée le 14-02-2012 à 23:02:03 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Yesterday, I bought this dress, it cost me expansive(impossible de mettre expensive derrière cost, cost signifie: qui nécessite la somme de et "cher" ne va pas) but it was the last one of the store.
- There was (pluriel + temps faux)many holes in my garden since moles have dug a tunnel.
- I had been doing my homework since 2 hours when Paul arrived to going to the cinema.
- When I was younger, I drew flowers all the time because I wanted to become a florist.
- When I was a child, I dreamt to become a famous actress because I was really into theatre.
- Since my mother (started drinking)
- I have driven my new car since I got my license.
- It was the first time I had cut(sliced) tomatoes to help my mom make dinner.
- Last week, Martin and his brother Maxim came at my home for my birthday and I was happy because it was 3 years since we had not seen each other // one another.
- I had already chosen to live in Africa when my mom implored me to stay in Belgium. ok!
Réponse: Temps du passé/aide de lilimouss94, postée le 14-02-2012 à 23:22:36 (S | E)
Alors, voilà ma correction pour les réponses erronées :
- Yesterday, I bought this dress, it cost me a lot but it was the last of one store.
- There are many holes in my garden since moles have dug a tunnel.
Par contre, je ne comprends pas mes fautes pour les phrases suivantes :
- When I was a child, I dreamt to become a famous actress because I was really into theater.
- I had been doing my homework since 2 hours when Paul arrived to going to the cinema.
- Last week, Martin and his brother Maxim came at (to ?) my home for my birthday and I was happy because it was 3 years since we hadn’t seen each other.
Réponse: Temps du passé/aide de gerondif, postée le 14-02-2012 à 23:31:58 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
la règle veut qu'une phrase avec un complément de temps en since + date, since + prétérit ou for + durée soit au present perfect.
I have been here since noon, for two hours, since I arrived.
A partir de là, voyez quels temps sont à corriger.
On dit I dream of + ing.
pour + verbe exprimant un but: I come to work, I come to help you.
since two hours: changez soit since, soit hours.
Réponse: Temps du passé/aide de lilimouss94, postée le 28-02-2012 à 22:10:35 (S | E)
Bonsoir, j'ai à nouveau fait des phrases simples afin de maîtriser les temps mais je ne suis une fois de plus pas sûre pour mes temps... Quelqu'un pourrait-il les vérifier s'il-vous-plaît?
Merci beaucoup.
Sharon put on 5 pounds because she had been eating too many sweets.
Everyone has teased Tom since he fell off the stage at the show his school.
When I was a child and I went to sea, I fed the seagulls on the beach.
He has felt better since he stopped smoking.
He had been fighting with a boy when the police arrived.
I was walking around when I found a little cat that seemed to be lost.
The plane had been flying when it was forced to rush into the Twin Towers.
Yesterday I forgot to wish a happy birthday to my dad, he was very disappointed.
Since I have forgiven my sister for lying to me, we get on better.
Since I have got my scholarship, I’m looking forward to begin my studies.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-02-2012 07:37
Bonjour,
Merci d'ouvrir un nouveau topic lorsque vous changez de sujet ou de texte à corriger, sinon tout sera mélangé et deviendra incompréhensible.
Cordialement.
Réponse: Temps du passé/aide de notrepere, postée le 29-02-2012 à 06:38:48 (S | E)
Bonjour
Sharon put on 5 pounds because she had been eating too many sweets.
Everyone has teased Tom since he fell off the stage at the show his school (quelque chose est manquante).
When I was a child and I went to sea, I fed the seagulls on the beach.
He has felt better (ou Present Perfect Progressive) since he stopped smoking.
He had been fighting with a boy when the police arrived.
I was walking around when I found a little cat that seemed to be lost.
The plane had been flying when it was forced to rush into the Twin Towers.
Yesterday I forgot to wish a happy birthday to my dad ('my dad a happy birthday' est plus courant), he was very disappointed.
Since I have forgiven my sister for lying to me, we get on better.
Since I have got my scholarship, I’m looking forward to beginning my studies.
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