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Correction/lettre motivation
Message de osrvdp posté le 05-05-2012 à 18:14:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je travaille actuellement sur ma lettre de motivation en anglais pour une candidature spontanée.
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer les corrections à faire et vos suggestions s'il vous plaît?
Par avance merci.
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Dear Madam, Dear Mister,
Eager to start a new professional challenge, I want to express my interest in joining your company as ***** in France or abroad. I believe my professional background and my personality are appropriate to fill your expectations for this position.
It is with attention that I have researched information about your company…I appreciated…(A adapter en fonction de l'entreprise)
Over my past four years of experience in ******, I have gained an overall knowledge of tools and ****** skills. You will note from the enclosed resume that my last work experience was in *******, where I was in charge of a portfolio in full autonomy. I had the opportunity to manage various commodities in a competitive and International environment, which required a certain ability to work in team.
I have always worked with passion on my previous jobs in order to improve the global ****** ****** terms and the competitiveness of the company.
Today, I would be interested in putting my skills at the disposal of ***** . Convinced to be able to meet your expectations, I remain at your disposal for a further interview.
Thank you for your time and consideration, I look forward to speaking with you soon about a position as *****.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-05-2012 20:30
Message de osrvdp posté le 05-05-2012 à 18:14:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je travaille actuellement sur ma lettre de motivation en anglais pour une candidature spontanée.
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer les corrections à faire et vos suggestions s'il vous plaît?
Par avance merci.
****************
Dear Madam, Dear Mister,
Eager to start a new professional challenge, I want to express my interest in joining your company as ***** in France or abroad. I believe my professional background and my personality are appropriate to fill your expectations for this position.
It is with attention that I have researched information about your company…I appreciated…(A adapter en fonction de l'entreprise)
Over my past four years of experience in ******, I have gained an overall knowledge of tools and ****** skills. You will note from the enclosed resume that my last work experience was in *******, where I was in charge of a portfolio in full autonomy. I had the opportunity to manage various commodities in a competitive and International environment, which required a certain ability to work in team.
I have always worked with passion on my previous jobs in order to improve the global ****** ****** terms and the competitiveness of the company.
Today, I would be interested in putting my skills at the disposal of ***** . Convinced to be able to meet your expectations, I remain at your disposal for a further interview.
Thank you for your time and consideration, I look forward to speaking with you soon about a position as *****.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-05-2012 20:30
Réponse: Correction/lettre motivation de ichigo, postée le 11-05-2012 à 19:41:44 (S | E)
Je ne vois pas de problème particulier, tu peux poster!
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