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Motivation/européenne
Message de institine posté le 31-05-2012 à 10:33:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai écrit ma lettre de motivation pour intégrer la Première Euro en ES.
Pourriez-vous me faire part de vos remarques et corrections s'il vous plaît ?
Merci à tous.
François
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is François. I'm currently in the year eleven at secondary school "Zola" and I would like to integrate the European Section in your school next year.
I'm interested by English culture. I already went to London with my parents: I'm passionate by the English history and I always listen to English music like Oasis, The Beatles or Cold Play.
I often watch lots of English or American movie in VO, too.
Besides, my aim is to enrich my knowledge and competences through the training of English. For me, speaking English is indispensable to make success in professional life. In fact, I hope to be a sportswriter for 7 years and I think it could be beneficial for me to speak English very well. I look some English sports and English information websites in my leisure time. I'm really enjoyed to learn it in actuality subject like Economies. In fact, I would like to study the Economic subjects in class of the year twelve.
On top of that, learn Shakespeare’s language is a real pleasure: I would like to discover some culture around the world and communicate with other people.
I have already formulated a request in the year ten and I repeat it because my motivation didn't flex. I am very motivated to produce the efforts which it requires andI would like a second chance.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favourable answer.
Best regards, François
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-05-2012 13:03
Message de institine posté le 31-05-2012 à 10:33:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai écrit ma lettre de motivation pour intégrer la Première Euro en ES.
Pourriez-vous me faire part de vos remarques et corrections s'il vous plaît ?
Merci à tous.
François
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is François. I'm currently in the year eleven at secondary school "Zola" and I would like to integrate the European Section in your school next year.
I'm interested by English culture. I already went to London with my parents: I'm passionate by the English history and I always listen to English music like Oasis, The Beatles or Cold Play.
I often watch lots of English or American movie in VO, too.
Besides, my aim is to enrich my knowledge and competences through the training of English. For me, speaking English is indispensable to make success in professional life. In fact, I hope to be a sportswriter for 7 years and I think it could be beneficial for me to speak English very well. I look some English sports and English information websites in my leisure time. I'm really enjoyed to learn it in actuality subject like Economies. In fact, I would like to study the Economic subjects in class of the year twelve.
On top of that, learn Shakespeare’s language is a real pleasure: I would like to discover some culture around the world and communicate with other people.
I have already formulated a request in the year ten and I repeat it because my motivation didn't flex. I am very motivated to produce the efforts which it requires andI would like a second chance.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favourable answer.
Best regards, François
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-05-2012 13:03
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