Lettre motivation/aide

Lettre motivation/aide
Message de juju356 posté le 15-11-2012 à 17:46:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

j'ai écrit cette lettre de motivation, pourriez-vous la corriger s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.

November 14, 2012

Dear Manager,

I am writing in response to your ad in the Portsmouth News concerning your need for a reception clerk at your new 4-star Portsmouth hotel and conference centre. I think that I have the skills that you are looking for.

Concerned my experience, I have been employed as personal assistant to the marketing manager at Gemco. During this period I have contact and prospect customers and also update customers’ files. With this job I became more organized and meticulous, I practiced few foreign languages such as English or German. In my placement of BTS at Europub-advertising agency I answered the phone and my cheerful personality was appreciated.

My education includes a Baccalauréat STI then a BTS . Throught these studies, I have knowledge in business then during my BTS I have improve my skills in sales and marketing. I am able to use reservation software and many functions of computer.

I plan to take evening coursework for become fluent in English language. I want also discover new countries and the opportunities to work in other countries with your company interest me very much.

Enclosed you will find a resume with more detail of my process. I am ready to meet you, if you have any questions.

Sincerely

-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 15-11-2012 18:33

---

Réponse: Lettre motivation/aide de bluestar, postée le 16-11-2012 à 13:53:42 (S | E)
Bonjour

J'ai obtenu le nom de l'entreprise à partir d'Internet. Vous devez orthographe américaine et les majuscules, comme indiqué

I am writing in response to your ad in the Portsmouth News concerning your need for a reception clerk at your new 4-star Portsmouth Hhotel and Cconference centre Center. I think that I have the skills that you are looking for.

Concerned my experience, I have been employed as personal assistant to the marketing manager at Gemco, a company which.... . During this period I have was in frequent contact with and prospect customers and also updated customers’ files. With this job I became more organized and meticulous, and I practiced a few foreign languages such as English or German. In my placement of BTS placement at the Europub-advertising agency I answered the phone and my cheerful personality was appreciated.

My education includes a Baccalauréat STI then a BTS . Throught these studies, I acquired have knowledge in of business and then during my BTS I have improved my skills in sales and marketing. I am able to use reservation software and have many functions other of computer skills.

I plan to take evening coursework for to become fluent in English language. I want also to discover new countries and the opportunities to work in other countries with your company interest me very much.

Enclosed you will find a resume with more detail of my process. I am ready to meet you, if you have any questions.

-------------------
Modifié par bluestar le 16-11-2012 13:55

---

Réponse: Lettre motivation/aide de notrepere, postée le 16-11-2012 à 17:17:45 (S | E)
Hello

Concerned (forme ing) my experience, I have been employed as a personal assistant to the Marketing Manager at Gemco. During this period I have (temps - suivez les conseils de bluestar) contact with prospective customers and also ....

---

Réponse: Lettre motivation/aide de juju356, postée le 19-11-2012 à 20:43:54 (S | E)
Merci pour votre aide

---

[POSTER UNE NOUVELLE REPONSE] [Suivre ce sujet]

Cours gratuits > Forum > Thèmes généraux, jeux, chansons