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Message de strangez posté le 24-02-2013 à 21:23:30 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir !
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider en m'indiquant les fautes présentes dans mon texte afin que je puisse les corriger ?
Le texte :
From my point of view, I found this work not only interesting but also very rewarding. Indeed, this work gave me the opportunity to discover in depth the interest of a film adaptation, and there always are variations and similarities between the novel and the film, what is specific to rewrites.. Furthermore, thanks to this work I know, now, how to make better use of my knowledge and I think that I have gained a solid knowledge of my subject.
Moreover, work in group for three months allowed me to communicate better and to find solutions faster. It is true that sometimes we coped with some difficulties such as the choice of the subject but thanks to the good communication of the group, we have been able to overcome them. In conclusion, despite some difficulties, I reached a good part of my objectives. About the place of the English, it was something essential in our work. To integrate it coherently, we decided to include games in English and each introductions of large parts in English also. And even if at the beginning, work in both French and English seemed to be something rather difficult, it was, finally really enriching.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-02-2013 21:36
Message de strangez posté le 24-02-2013 à 21:23:30 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir !
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider en m'indiquant les fautes présentes dans mon texte afin que je puisse les corriger ?
Le texte :
From my point of view, I found this work not only interesting but also very rewarding. Indeed, this work gave me the opportunity to discover in depth the interest of a film adaptation, and there always are variations and similarities between the novel and the film, what is specific to rewrites.. Furthermore, thanks to this work I know, now, how to make better use of my knowledge and I think that I have gained a solid knowledge of my subject.
Moreover, work in group for three months allowed me to communicate better and to find solutions faster. It is true that sometimes we coped with some difficulties such as the choice of the subject but thanks to the good communication of the group, we have been able to overcome them. In conclusion, despite some difficulties, I reached a good part of my objectives. About the place of the English, it was something essential in our work. To integrate it coherently, we decided to include games in English and each introductions of large parts in English also. And even if at the beginning, work in both French and English seemed to be something rather difficult, it was, finally really enriching.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-02-2013 21:36
Réponse: Correction/Bilan personnel de notrepere, postée le 24-02-2013 à 22:04:09 (S | E)
BonjourFrom my point of view, I found this work not only interesting but also very rewarding. Indeed, this work gave me the opportunity to discover in depth the interest
of a film adaptation, and there always are variations and similarities between the novel and the film, what is specific to rewrites.. Furthermore, thanks to this work I know, now, how to make better use of my knowledge and I think that I have gained a solid knowledge of my subject.Moreover, working in a group for three months allowed me to communicate better and to find solutions faster. It is true that sometimes we coped with some difficulties such as the choice of the subject but thanks to the good communication of the group, we have been able to overcome them. In conclusion, despite some difficulties, I reached a good part of my objectives. About the place of the English, it was something essential in our work. To integrate it coherently, we decided to include games in English and each introductions of large parts in English also. And even if at the beginning, work in both French and English seemed to be something rather difficult, it was, finally really enriching.
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