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Message de jices posté le 10-05-2013 à 19:33:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je fais actuellement mon dossier pour l'oral de bac Terminale S, en LV1.
Dans la notion Locations and forms of Power, j'ai fait un petit paragraphe pas mal, mais je pense avoir fait des fautes (de syntaxe):
In this poster, we can see a gun and the American flag. There is a text that explains there is 1 death for 33,000 people in one year in the USA, and only 1 death for 600,000 people in Australia.
In the United States, there is a confrontation between those who are for the right to bear arms and those who are against.
Many associations such as NRA or GOA are pro-weapon ownership and defend firearm ownership, sport shooting, hunting and self-defense training.
These associations quote the second amendment to support their discourse because this law is part of Bill Of Right and the right to bear a gun is part of the American dream.
For them, carry a gun provides security for citizens.
These associations are powerful because they include million of members and even some presidents such as George Bush. Just the NRA has 4.3 million members.
But a protest movement increases more and more because weapons are a lot of violence: armed robbery, gang fights and killings.
Many campaigns trying to heckle people and want arms control and weapons more difficult to access because there is too much violence and deaths in the United States.
Merci de votre aide
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-05-2013 22:46
Message de jices posté le 10-05-2013 à 19:33:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je fais actuellement mon dossier pour l'oral de bac Terminale S, en LV1.
Dans la notion Locations and forms of Power, j'ai fait un petit paragraphe pas mal, mais je pense avoir fait des fautes (de syntaxe):
In this poster, we can see a gun and the American flag. There is a text that explains there is 1 death for 33,000 people in one year in the USA, and only 1 death for 600,000 people in Australia.
In the United States, there is a confrontation between those who are for the right to bear arms and those who are against.
Many associations such as NRA or GOA are pro-weapon ownership and defend firearm ownership, sport shooting, hunting and self-defense training.
These associations quote the second amendment to support their discourse because this law is part of Bill Of Right and the right to bear a gun is part of the American dream.
For them, carry a gun provides security for citizens.
These associations are powerful because they include million of members and even some presidents such as George Bush. Just the NRA has 4.3 million members.
But a protest movement increases more and more because weapons are a lot of violence: armed robbery, gang fights and killings.
Many campaigns trying to heckle people and want arms control and weapons more difficult to access because there is too much violence and deaths in the United States.
Merci de votre aide
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-05-2013 22:46
Réponse: Aide Bac/Power de jices, postée le 10-05-2013 à 19:36:38 (S | E)
J'ai oublié la phrase de fin:
So there is a confrontation between two sides which are trying to have power over the other.
Réponse: Aide Bac/Power de lucile83, postée le 11-05-2013 à 18:20:39 (S | E)
Anyone?
Réponse: Aide Bac/Power de lucile83, postée le 12-05-2013 à 11:36:30 (S | E)
Hello,
Erreurs en bleu
In this poster, we can see a gun and the American flag. There is a text that//trop lourd explains there is 1 death for 33,000 people in one year in the USA, and only 1 death for 600,000 people in Australia.
In the United States, there is a confrontation between those who are for the right to bear arms and those who are against.
Many associations such as NRA or GOA are pro-weapon ownership and defend firearm ownership, sport shooting, hunting and self-defense training.
These associations quote the second amendment to support their discourse because this law is part of Bill Of Right and the right to bear a gun is part of the American dream.
For them, carry a gun provides security for citizens.
These associations are powerful because they include million of members and even some presidents such as George Bush. Just the NRA has 4.3 million members.
But a protest movement increases more and more because weapons are a lot of violence: armed robbery, gang fights and killings.
Many campaigns trying to heckle people and want arms control and weapons more difficult to access because there is too much violence and deaths in the United States. phrase incompréhensible.
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