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Message de kcaj posté le 06-06-2013 à 11:46:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'aimerais qu'une personne ayant un niveau d'anglais confirmé puisse me corriger ou me donner des conseils sur mon abstract.
To validate my IT diploma, I done a training period from 1. April to 7. June in a company. I worked in xxx which is situated on two places,xxx and xxx.
My mission is based on the correction of bugs which are presents into the software, and then add some functionalities if the technicians have wishes to improve the software. This software is very important for the maintenance, without it the engines could not work well and ceaselessly. For example when the warehouseman makes interventions, he has to fill a form in, in order that the time during which the engine is stopped, be taked into consideration. Thanks to the software he can do it easily, quickly and does not need to write it on a sheet of paper. This training period allowed me to discover professional world, and resolve problems by my self. After this I think, I will be able to perform more independently
Merci d'avance pour la lecture de mon sujet.
Cordialement
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-06-2013 12:53
Message de kcaj posté le 06-06-2013 à 11:46:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'aimerais qu'une personne ayant un niveau d'anglais confirmé puisse me corriger ou me donner des conseils sur mon abstract.
To validate my IT diploma, I done a training period from 1. April to 7. June in a company. I worked in xxx which is situated on two places,xxx and xxx.
My mission is based on the correction of bugs which are presents into the software, and then add some functionalities if the technicians have wishes to improve the software. This software is very important for the maintenance, without it the engines could not work well and ceaselessly. For example when the warehouseman makes interventions, he has to fill a form in, in order that the time during which the engine is stopped, be taked into consideration. Thanks to the software he can do it easily, quickly and does not need to write it on a sheet of paper. This training period allowed me to discover professional world, and resolve problems by my self. After this I think, I will be able to perform more independently
Merci d'avance pour la lecture de mon sujet.
Cordialement
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-06-2013 12:53
Réponse: Abstract/Résumé de hushpuppy, postée le 06-06-2013 à 22:21:36 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Il y a des corrections en bleu et des conseils en violet :
To validate my IT diploma, I finished a training period from 1 April to 7 June at xxx, at their xxx location.
My training is(passé) based on the correction of bugs which are(passé) presents in
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