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Message de gnanga posté le 05-07-2013 à 18:00:08 (S | E | F)
Hi dear all, it's me again
I wrote a text and I would like to have a correction of it please:
Since a few days, it is raining hard with some flashes lightning like storms,in my country every morning.That's not allowing some workers like me to work (aller au boulot).Some of ours arrived soppy or for the others, they come late at work.The work atmosphere varying between cold and a great desire of sleep if you have nothing to do.Sometimes, this went all the afternoon,as results, you have to fight to find a taxi to go back home.And if luckily, by the ends of all you arrive at home, all you need is to go up on your bed and sleep. But no, before doing it you must cook something to your familly and concerning your children, be sure that they done their homeworks and have had a nice day. It is so difficult to be a responsible and good mother, but I like it.
Thank you for helping me
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-07-2013 21:47
Message de gnanga posté le 05-07-2013 à 18:00:08 (S | E | F)
Hi dear all, it's me again
I wrote a text and I would like to have a correction of it please:
Since a few days, it is raining hard with some flashes lightning like storms,in my country every morning.That's not allowing some workers like me to work (aller au boulot).Some of ours arrived soppy or for the others, they come late at work.The work atmosphere varying between cold and a great desire of sleep if you have nothing to do.Sometimes, this went all the afternoon,as results, you have to fight to find a taxi to go back home.And if luckily, by the ends of all you arrive at home, all you need is to go up on your bed and sleep. But no, before doing it you must cook something to your familly and concerning your children, be sure that they done their homeworks and have had a nice day. It is so difficult to be a responsible and good mother, but I like it.
Thank you for helping me
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-07-2013 21:47
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