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Message de aurel63 posté le 27-03-2015 à 11:38:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je voudrais savoir si vous pourriez me corriger pour l'oral du bac d'anglais, je voudrais vraiment assurer dessus, alors si vous aviez des conseils et des avis à me donner, je suis prêt à tout entendre.
Merci pour vos réponses.
This passage is by John Dos Passos, in 1937. A passage entitled The Big Money.
It's a novel, in which he describes the US like an El Dorado. Rudolph Valentino leave Castellaneta to go to Amreica. He has got 19 years old. He want to make the best of him, so he looks for a job in order to won money. For him, live in the US is the possibility to go ahead. He is a tangodancer, so he goes to cabarets. He met Jean Acker and together they dance. Moreover, he goes to hollywood, and he got his chance in The Four Horseman. Thanks to the film, he becomes a high personality, and all woomen are really interested to him.
This document shows the notion of progress, because Rudolph was a simple man without money and he is an exile. But when he arrived in the US, he found a job and climbs on the social order. In the end, he is a man with money, he won his notoriety with his job. We can start from nothing and succeeded his life.
Bien à vous, je pense qu'il y a beaucoup de fautes, bonne journée.Merci.
Aurélien
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2015 15:07
Message de aurel63 posté le 27-03-2015 à 11:38:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je voudrais savoir si vous pourriez me corriger pour l'oral du bac d'anglais, je voudrais vraiment assurer dessus, alors si vous aviez des conseils et des avis à me donner, je suis prêt à tout entendre.
Merci pour vos réponses.
This passage is by John Dos Passos, in 1937. A passage entitled The Big Money.
It's a novel, in which he describes the US like an El Dorado. Rudolph Valentino leave Castellaneta to go to Amreica. He has got 19 years old. He want to make the best of him, so he looks for a job in order to won money. For him, live in the US is the possibility to go ahead. He is a tangodancer, so he goes to cabarets. He met Jean Acker and together they dance. Moreover, he goes to hollywood, and he got his chance in The Four Horseman. Thanks to the film, he becomes a high personality, and all woomen are really interested to him.
This document shows the notion of progress, because Rudolph was a simple man without money and he is an exile. But when he arrived in the US, he found a job and climbs on the social order. In the end, he is a man with money, he won his notoriety with his job. We can start from nothing and succeeded his life.
Bien à vous, je pense qu'il y a beaucoup de fautes, bonne journée.Merci.
Aurélien
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2015 15:07
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