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Message de valto posté le 21-04-2015 à 09:56:39 (S | E | F)
bonjour
j'ai quelque peu des difficultés en anglais et j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes dans ce que j'ai écrit. Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaitme les trouver et m'aider à les corriger. Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Progress
Since 1800 (heighten hundred) the progress develop. Its industrial revolution, many scientific create object, inventions; example in 1837 Samuel Morse create Telegraph and 1903 the wright brothers in USA create gasoline. The Progress is the development of society, it is also an evolution of knowledge that allows for people to have a better life. But progress also has disadvantages. Progress has an important place in our society. Progress brings different things, it can be technological progress, scientific progress...
So we can ask: What are the different aspect of progress? (Comment le progrès a changé avec le temps)
In the first time we can see the advantage of progress and the second time we can see the drawback of progress and the limit of progress.
The progress it’s important today because a lot of people use new technologies. Medical progress it’s an advantage for people because Medical progress consist for scientific to find new technologies example to replace old bodies, to find new disease. Example in a longer life (its audio document) 2 people evoke a treatment, with treatment we can live 150 years, it’s surprising it ‘very good for people. The treatment consist rejuvenate cells (shin, organs…). So we can live much longer with this treatment; it is a real benefit. Today evolution is rapid because exist new school, new laboratory. He help people in your life. So we can avoid conflicts because with medical progress we can cured disease example cancer we have many invention who find and cured disease. Example in fighting for a future (it’s a text) Anna it’s a girl who must give her organs for her sister. She helped her sister many times and she refuses to help again. Her parents for this problem because her sister can have a new organ.
However people do not have a lot of money because technologies it’s cost. Its drawback. Also for serum in longer life people evocate a many problems example people work until 80, it’s not real because people protest against work until 67 years, also many people health costs, unemployment increases.
The limit of progress are different from country. A community, a country refused progress example Amish community used ancestral tradition used a little modernity, an over community refused progress it’s Kagang in Indonesia. Also country don’t have access to progress example some countries in Africa don’t have aces to progress. Although progress is accepted in some countries such as France or the United States some invention are not accepted by either ethics or fear of the unknown.
Finally progress have many advantage and many drawback we interesting medical progress we can see the limitless of this progress. Also he exist other progress and over advantage, drawback and limit. And one may ask what are these other forms of progress are?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-04-2015 11:24
Message de valto posté le 21-04-2015 à 09:56:39 (S | E | F)
bonjour
j'ai quelque peu des difficultés en anglais et j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes dans ce que j'ai écrit. Pouvez-vous s'il vous plait
Progress
Since 1800 (heighten hundred) the progress develop. Its industrial revolution, many scientific create object, inventions; example in 1837 Samuel Morse create Telegraph and 1903 the wright brothers in USA create gasoline. The Progress is the development of society, it is also an evolution of knowledge that allows for people to have a better life. But progress also has disadvantages. Progress has an important place in our society. Progress brings different things, it can be technological progress, scientific progress...
So we can ask: What are the different aspect of progress? (Comment le progrès a changé avec le temps)
In the first time we can see the advantage of progress and the second time we can see the drawback of progress and the limit of progress.
The progress it’s important today because a lot of people use new technologies. Medical progress it’s an advantage for people because Medical progress consist for scientific to find new technologies example to replace old bodies, to find new disease. Example in a longer life (its audio document) 2 people evoke a treatment, with treatment we can live 150 years, it’s surprising it ‘very good for people. The treatment consist rejuvenate cells (shin, organs…). So we can live much longer with this treatment; it is a real benefit. Today evolution is rapid because exist new school, new laboratory. He help people in your life. So we can avoid conflicts because with medical progress we can cured disease example cancer we have many invention who find and cured disease. Example in fighting for a future (it’s a text) Anna it’s a girl who must give her organs for her sister. She helped her sister many times and she refuses to help again. Her parents for this problem because her sister can have a new organ.
However people do not have a lot of money because technologies it’s cost. Its drawback. Also for serum in longer life people evocate a many problems example people work until 80, it’s not real because people protest against work until 67 years, also many people health costs, unemployment increases.
The limit of progress are different from country. A community, a country refused progress example Amish community used ancestral tradition used a little modernity, an over community refused progress it’s Kagang in Indonesia. Also country don’t have access to progress example some countries in Africa don’t have aces to progress. Although progress is accepted in some countries such as France or the United States some invention are not accepted by either ethics or fear of the unknown.
Finally progress have many advantage and many drawback we interesting medical progress we can see the limitless of this progress. Also he exist other progress and over advantage, drawback and limit. And one may ask what are these other forms of progress are?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-04-2015 11:24
Réponse: Bac/idea of progress de valto, postée le 22-04-2015 à 09:49:09 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide s'ilvous plait; je vais passer à l'oral dans quelques jours et j'ai vraiment besoin de votre aide car effet je suis complètement nul en anglais .
J'ai 4 notions à préparer, j'ai su en faire une pour l'instant. Merci pour vos réponses.
Est ce que quelqu'un peut m'aider?
Réponse: Bac/idea of progress de here4u, postée le 22-04-2015 à 10:10:58 (S | E)
Hello !
I'll start... but you should have asked much before...
many people are on well-deserved holiday just now...Progress
Since 1800 (heighten hundred) the progress develop(temps et aspect). Its industrial revolution, many scientific create object, inventions(this isn't a real sentence...); example in 1837 Samuel Morse create XXX Telegraph and XX 1903 the wright brothers in XXX USA create gasoline.(word order)
TheProgress is the development of society, it is also an evolution of knowledge that allows for people to have a better life. But progress also has disadvantages. Progress has an important place in our society. Progress brings different things, it can be technological progress, scientific progress...
So we can ask: What are the different aspectX of progress? (Comment le progrès a changé avec le temps)=> come on ! Where's your work?
The progress it’s important today because a lot of people use new technologies. Medical progress it’s an advantage for people because Medical progress consist for scientific to find new technologies. For ? example, to replace old bodies,(???) to find new diseaseS. Example in a longer life (its audio document) 2 people evoke a treatment, with treatment we can live 150 years, it’s surprising it ‘ S very good for people. The treatment consist rejuvenate cells (shin,(shins? or skin?) organs…). So we can live much longer with this treatment; it is a real benefit. Today, evolution is rapid because exist new school, new laboratory. He help??? people in your life. So we can avoid conflicts because with medical progress we can cured disease such as
However people do not have a lot of money because technologies it’s cost. Its drawback.??? Also for serum in longer life people evocate a many problems example people work until 80, it’s not real because people protest against work until 67 years, also many people health costs, unemployment increases.
You have a lot of work to do ...A bit late to start working now ... but try !!!
Réponse: Bac/idea of progress de valto, postée le 22-04-2015 à 10:46:30 (S | E)
Bonjour,
j'ai rectifié les erreurs; pouvez-vous me dire s'il y en a encore et est-ce que c'est possible de le faire aussi pour les 2 derniers paragraphes s'il vous plit?
Merci pour votre aide.
Progress
Since 1800 (heighten hundred) progress developed. Its industrial revolution, many scientific create objects, inventions; example in 1837 Samuel Morse create Telegraph and in 1903 in the USA the wright brothers create gasoline.
Progress is the development of society, it is also an evolution of knowledge that allows by people to have a better life. But progress also has disadvantages. Progress has an important place in our society. Progress brings different things, can be technological progress, scientific progress...
So we can ask: What are the different aspect of progress? (Comment le progrès a changé avec le temps)
First we can see the advantages of progress and then we can see the drawbacks of progress and the limit of progress.
Progress is important today because a lot of people use new technologies. Medical progress is an advantage for people because Medical progress consist for scientific to find new technologies example to replace old bodies, to find new disease. Example in a longer life (it is audio document) 2 people evoke a treatment, with treatment we can live 150 years, it’s surprising it ‘very good for people. The treatment consist to rejuvenated cells (shins, organs…). So we can live much longer with this treatment; it is a real benefit. Today evolution is rapid because existed new school, new laboratory. Scientific help people in your life. So we can avoid conflicts because with medical progress we can cured disease such as cancer. We have many invention who cured disease. Example in fighting for a future (it’s a text) Anna is a girl who must give her organs for her sister. She helped her sister many times and she refuses to help again. Her parents for this problem can have a new organ for a girl.
However people do not have a lot of money because technologies are cost. Its drawbacks because many people don’t buy new technologies. Also for serum in text longer life people evocate a many problems example people work until 80, it’s not real because people protested against work until 67 years, also many people health costs, unemployment increases.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-04-2015 14:56
Réponse: Bac/idea of progress de valto, postée le 22-04-2015 à 17:42:13 (S | E)
est ce que quelqu'un peut me répondre?? s'il vous plait
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