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Message de jerolodie posté le 29-04-2015 à 18:58:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
y aurait-il quelqu'un s'il vous plait qui veuille bien corriger mon discours que j'ai préparé pour l'oral d'anglais pour mon Bac pro qui durera 5 mn.Merci pour vos réponses.
En fait j'ai décidé de présenter Barack Obama et je dis : "
Barack Obama is the 44th President of the United States of America. He is the first African American to be President.
Barack Obama was born in Hawaii in 1961 to a black Kenyan father and a white American mother. So, not only he was the first African American president, Obama was also the first to be born outside the Continental United States.
Barack’s family moved to Indonesia in 1967. Obama majored in political science and international relations at Columbia University in New York.
Barack Obama taught law at the University of Chicago law school for twelve years.
He became an Illinois senator in 1996 and he was elected as a U.S senator in 2004.
He won the U.S presidential election in 2008. Obama’s charisma, intelligence, and powerful speeches have made him extremely popular with many Americans. He has been very sucessfull with his message for change.
He is also the winner of the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize. He supported legislation on conservation, energy, immigration and honest leadership. And in 2012, he won a second term despite a poor economy and high unemployment."
Merci pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-04-2015 19:48
Message de jerolodie posté le 29-04-2015 à 18:58:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
y aurait-il quelqu'un s'il vous plait qui veuille bien corriger mon discours que j'ai préparé pour l'oral d'anglais pour mon Bac pro qui durera 5 mn.Merci pour vos réponses.
En fait j'ai décidé de présenter Barack Obama et je dis : "
Barack Obama is the 44th President of the United States of America. He is the first African American to be President.
Barack Obama was born in Hawaii in 1961 to a black Kenyan father and a white American mother. So, not only he was the first African American president, Obama was also the first to be born outside the Continental United States.
Barack’s family moved to Indonesia in 1967. Obama majored in political science and international relations at Columbia University in New York.
Barack Obama taught law at the University of Chicago law school for twelve years.
He became an Illinois senator in 1996 and he was elected as a U.S senator in 2004.
He won the U.S presidential election in 2008. Obama’s charisma, intelligence, and powerful speeches have made him extremely popular with many Americans. He has been very sucessfull with his message for change.
He is also the winner of the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize. He supported legislation on conservation, energy, immigration and honest leadership. And in 2012, he won a second term despite a poor economy and high unemployment."
Merci pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-04-2015 19:48
Réponse: Oral/Bac pro de gerondif, postée le 29-04-2015 à 23:05:12 (S | E)
Bonjour,
pas grand chose à corriger sur ce texte. Il vous restera après peut-être à vous exprimer vous-même.
Barack Obama is the 44th President of the United States of America. He is the first African American to be President.
Barack Obama was born in Hawaii in 1961 to a black Kenyan father and a white American mother. So, not only was he the first African American president, Obama was also the first to be born outside the Continental United States.
Barack’s family moved to Indonesia in 1967. Obama majored in political science and international relations at Columbia University in New York.
Barack Obama taught law at the University of Chicago law school for twelve years.
He became an Illinois senator in 1996 and he was elected as a U.S senator in 2004.
He won the U.S presidential election in 2008. Obama’s charisma, intelligence, and powerful speeches have made him extremely popular with many Americans. He has been very sucessfull(orthographe) with his message for change.
He is also the winner of the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize. He supported legislation on conservation, energy, immigration and honest leadership. And in 2012, he won a second term despite a poor economy and high unemployment."
Réponse: Oral/Bac pro de jerolodie, postée le 01-05-2015 à 10:15:42 (S | E)
Grand merci à toi GERONDIF pour ta correction... En effet j'ai prévu un petit temps pour me présenter avant de parler de Barack OBAMA.
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