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Message de lila75 posté le 04-05-2015 à 22:32:53 (S | E | F)
Hey there!
je postule pour un Master spécialisé et je dois fournir une lettre de motivation rédigée en anglais.
C'est pourquoi j'ai besoin de votre aide :/ ou plutôt votre avis, ou d'éventuelles modifications à faire s'il vous plait.
Je vous remercie d'avance ^^ !!!!
Subject: Personal statement for XXX School
Dear Sir or Madam
I am asking to be considered for the master 1 degree XXX in your school.
I began my studies at University XXX in studying Economics and management. These three years of Bachelor degree allowed me to acquire knowledge in management but also in accounting and finance. I have developed a great interest in International business, therefore I decided to continue my studies in International economic Master 1 degree, which I could improve my knowledge in international finance, and mainly business English.
This training is rewarding, but does not correspond to my expectations. I made the choice to reorient for several reasons: On the one hand I wish to do my training in apprenticeship because I wish receive technical dimension and gain solid knowledge which I need, such as your course of negotiations practices. On the other hand, my various jobs allowed me to refine my professional choice. To this end I wish today orient my project towards the purchasing management and through my passions, automobile sector. Indeed, I am a passionate car enthusiast, I go each year to the Paris motor show which allowed me a solid understanding of this sector. I desire naturally integrate priority this business.
During my studies, I had several seasonal employment in Services firm in Paris. I trained for 5 months, I was in charge of selecting suppliers with the best quality / price ratio and to make them profitable for the company, while meeting customer’s deadlines. I also contributed in implementation of ISO 9001 quality system, which require analytical skills.
Moreover, I have developed a great interest in area of purchasing: how the company incorporates a technological change and how does this affect the purchasing strategy?
At the XXX School, I will have the opportunity to study in a great studious environment, and to combine my theoretical knowledge in economics and management that I acquired in Paris 1, and the operational aspect of your master degree. In addition, I strongly appreciate the information which I collected during the open house, convinced me of the demanding nature of your program. In particular, your personal accompaniment to the job searching.
Thanks for you times and consideration.Yours faithfully
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-05-2015 22:50
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Modifié par lila75 le 06-05-2015 22:39
Message de lila75 posté le 04-05-2015 à 22:32:53 (S | E | F)
Hey there!
je postule pour un Master spécialisé et je dois fournir une lettre de motivation rédigée en anglais.
C'est pourquoi j'ai besoin de votre aide :/ ou plutôt votre avis, ou d'éventuelles modifications à faire s'il vous plait.
Je vous remercie d'avance ^^ !!!!
Subject: Personal statement for XXX School
Dear Sir or Madam
I am asking to be considered for the master 1 degree XXX in your school.
I began my studies at University XXX in studying Economics and management. These three years of Bachelor degree allowed me to acquire knowledge in management but also in accounting and finance. I have developed a great interest in International business, therefore I decided to continue my studies in International economic Master 1 degree, which I could improve my knowledge in international finance, and mainly business English.
This training is rewarding, but does not correspond to my expectations. I made the choice to reorient for several reasons: On the one hand I wish to do my training in apprenticeship because I wish receive technical dimension and gain solid knowledge which I need, such as your course of negotiations practices. On the other hand, my various jobs allowed me to refine my professional choice. To this end I wish today orient my project towards the purchasing management and through my passions, automobile sector. Indeed, I am a passionate car enthusiast, I go each year to the Paris motor show which allowed me a solid understanding of this sector. I desire naturally integrate priority this business.
During my studies, I had several seasonal employment in Services firm in Paris. I trained for 5 months, I was in charge of selecting suppliers with the best quality / price ratio and to make them profitable for the company, while meeting customer’s deadlines. I also contributed in implementation of ISO 9001 quality system, which require analytical skills.
Moreover, I have developed a great interest in area of purchasing: how the company incorporates a technological change and how does this affect the purchasing strategy?
At the XXX School, I will have the opportunity to study in a great studious environment, and to combine my theoretical knowledge in economics and management that I acquired in Paris 1, and the operational aspect of your master degree. In addition, I strongly appreciate the information which I collected during the open house, convinced me of the demanding nature of your program. In particular, your personal accompaniment to the job searching.
Thanks for you times and consideration.Yours faithfully
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-05-2015 22:50
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Modifié par lila75 le 06-05-2015 22:39
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