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Message de camillebrl posté le 08-05-2015 à 16:00:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai fait une introduction pour cette notion qui fait partie des 4 notions à présenter pour l'oral du Bac dans deux semaines, mais je pense avoir fait pas mal de fautes.. Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger cette intro? Tout conseil et commentaire est bienvenu!
Merci d'avance
"I am going to develop the notion of Places and forms of power. In political and social sciences, the power is the ability to influence the behavior of the human being in order to maintain law and order. Although this power can be regarded as unfair, it’s necessary to discharge it in our human society. Indeed the term authority is often used to define a power viewed as legitimate by the social order. This is why there is a need for a countervailing power to rebalance the society and to fight against inequalities. Each fight has its own leader, and this resistance contributes to sway the famous balance of powers. Actually it means that it allows people who are in the margin of the society to regain a place in it. However we could wonder how an abuse of power can be exercised in our society. First of all we are going to see the abuse of power on a minority that generates racism, sexism, etc. and then the one due to the superiority of some people."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2015 18:55
Message de camillebrl posté le 08-05-2015 à 16:00:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai fait une introduction pour cette notion qui fait partie des 4 notions à présenter pour l'oral du Bac dans deux semaines, mais je pense avoir fait pas mal de fautes.. Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger cette intro? Tout conseil et commentaire est bienvenu!
Merci d'avance
"I am going to develop the notion of Places and forms of power. In political and social sciences, the power is the ability to influence the behavior of the human being in order to maintain law and order. Although this power can be regarded as unfair, it’s necessary to discharge it in our human society. Indeed the term authority is often used to define a power viewed as legitimate by the social order. This is why there is a need for a countervailing power to rebalance the society and to fight against inequalities. Each fight has its own leader, and this resistance contributes to sway the famous balance of powers. Actually it means that it allows people who are in the margin of the society to regain a place in it. However we could wonder how an abuse of power can be exercised in our society. First of all we are going to see the abuse of power on a minority that generates racism, sexism, etc. and then the one due to the superiority of some people."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2015 18:55
Réponse: Bac/Lieux et formes pouvoir de laure95, postée le 09-05-2015 à 18:08:08 (S | E)
In political and social science
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-05-2015 18:29
Pas de style sms sur le forum, merci.
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