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Message de nirian posté le 29-01-2016 à 15:40:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je souhaiterais partir en Angleterre cet été pour améliorer mon anglais en travaillant dans un hôtel en tant que serveur, j’ai écrit une lettre de motivation mais je pense qu’elle doit contenir des fautes ou des tournures maladroites.
Pourriez-vous m’aider à la corriger ?
Merci d’avance pour votre aide,
bonne journée,
Nirian.
"Dear Madam, Sir,
Currently in first year of nurse studies in Toulouse (France), I am looking for a job in catering or hospitality this summer in July and August 2016 to improve my English.
Having worked in the fast-food business, I believe I have gained the organization and seriousness necessary to work in a team. Moreover, working at hospital has taught me to work efficiently and listen to others which is, I think, indispensable in catering trade.
Diligent, hardworking and autonomous, I wish to apply to join your business.
Please find attached my resume for your review.
Besides, I would appreciate the opportunity to speak with you about my interests and qualifications in more detail.
Thank you for your time and consideration,
Sincerely,"
Sachant que dans mon CV j'ai mis une partie objectif avec dedans:
"Objective
Looking for a two-month summer job in catering trade, contributing enthusiasm, dedication, responsibility, and good work ethic, combined with a desire to utilize my customer service skills as a flexible worker in your restaurant during summer 2016."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-01-2016 23:15
Message de nirian posté le 29-01-2016 à 15:40:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je souhaiterais partir en Angleterre cet été pour améliorer mon anglais en travaillant dans un hôtel en tant que serveur, j’ai écrit une lettre de motivation mais je pense qu’elle doit contenir des fautes ou des tournures maladroites.
Pourriez-vous m’aider à la corriger ?
Merci d’avance pour votre aide,
bonne journée,
Nirian.
"Dear Madam, Sir,
Currently in first year of nurse studies in Toulouse (France), I am looking for a job in catering or hospitality this summer in July and August 2016 to improve my English.
Having worked in the fast-food business, I believe I have gained the organization and seriousness necessary to work in a team. Moreover, working at hospital has taught me to work efficiently and listen to others which is, I think, indispensable in catering trade.
Diligent, hardworking and autonomous, I wish to apply to join your business.
Please find attached my resume for your review.
Besides, I would appreciate the opportunity to speak with you about my interests and qualifications in more detail.
Thank you for your time and consideration,
Sincerely,"
Sachant que dans mon CV j'ai mis une partie objectif avec dedans:
"Objective
Looking for a two-month summer job in catering trade, contributing enthusiasm, dedication, responsibility, and good work ethic, combined with a desire to utilize my customer service skills as a flexible worker in your restaurant during summer 2016."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-01-2016 23:15
Réponse: Cover letter/summer job de lucile83, postée le 09-02-2016 à 13:58:25 (S | E)
Hello,...anyone?
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