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Message de supermoquette posté le 08-03-2016 à 11:13:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à toutes et à tous,
je vais envoyer ma candidature à une école mais je pense qu'il y a des fautes dans ma lettre de motivation..
Vous pouvez Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait? Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear
My name is ---------- and last year I passed my high school diploma. After school I decided to collect some practical experiences, at xxx for example. Afterwards I went in France to work as au pair in an Irish family. I always was interested in different cultures and languages. I grew up bilingual (German and Russian language), so I could find out really early that my interest in the world is much more than just a period of my life. Beside to English and French, I also learned Spanish at school.
The great reputation of the school and also an informative day at xxx made my decision between several schools easier. I want to study “International Business” because I am curious, what will mean that I am always interested in new things and I am firmly convinced to recognize this quality in this course. The language diversity and Internationality let me blossom out. As well the practical guidance is an important point and I really like the idea to spend an internship abroad so I can experience the theory in real life.
I am able to learn new things really fast and I look forward to new challenges. On my opinion the studies are a challenge as well, especially the English-speaking lessons. Furthermore I will learn a number of languages at the same time and I am sure that I will be able to take the pressure because I have a habit of speaking and learning several languages.
My talent of organization and also my team spirit, I could developed at the high school during the finals. As co- organisator of our graduation party I could perfectly show my skills while respecting the student’s wishes and the budget.
“International Business” serves as a basis for the following master and I also imagine that my flexibility, my self- confidence and also my friendly, open-minded character will be useful in future as well.
I greatly appreciate your interest and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-03-2016 11:27
Message de supermoquette posté le 08-03-2016 à 11:13:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à toutes et à tous,
je vais envoyer ma candidature à une école mais je pense qu'il y a des fautes dans ma lettre de motivation..
Dear
My name is ---------- and last year I passed my high school diploma. After school I decided to collect some practical experiences, at xxx for example. Afterwards I went in France to work as au pair in an Irish family. I always was interested in different cultures and languages. I grew up bilingual (German and Russian language), so I could find out really early that my interest in the world is much more than just a period of my life. Beside to English and French, I also learned Spanish at school.
The great reputation of the school and also an informative day at xxx made my decision between several schools easier. I want to study “International Business” because I am curious, what will mean that I am always interested in new things and I am firmly convinced to recognize this quality in this course. The language diversity and Internationality let me blossom out. As well the practical guidance is an important point and I really like the idea to spend an internship abroad so I can experience the theory in real life.
I am able to learn new things really fast and I look forward to new challenges. On my opinion the studies are a challenge as well, especially the English-speaking lessons. Furthermore I will learn a number of languages at the same time and I am sure that I will be able to take the pressure because I have a habit of speaking and learning several languages.
My talent of organization and also my team spirit, I could developed at the high school during the finals. As co- organisator of our graduation party I could perfectly show my skills while respecting the student’s wishes and the budget.
“International Business” serves as a basis for the following master and I also imagine that my flexibility, my self- confidence and also my friendly, open-minded character will be useful in future as well.
I greatly appreciate your interest and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-03-2016 11:27
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