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Message de annadream posté le 09-04-2016 à 10:41:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois postuler à unposte emploi qui demande une lettre de motivation en anglais. N'ayant pas pratiqué depuis longtemps, j'aurais aimé avoir une correction s'il y a des fautes.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses
Following your ad on your website, I am applying for the sales coordinator’s position in your office.
I am currently in my second year of BTS Tourism and I will take my exam in July. I will be available from July. Thanks to my education, I am able to give advices about different destinations that you propose in your company and to use sales technics to sell travels. I also had an internship in welcoming and in a travel agency to familiarize myself with the work on the field. Moreover, I studied abroad for a month and I know how this type of travel are organized. I know your compagny for a few years now and I stand regularly informed of your company’s news. Interested by “work & study abroad programs” for a long time, I choose to conduct a study about it for my exam that I will defend in June. So, I think I have the knowledge and the interest necessary to carry out missions that will be entrusted to me.
Very motivated to get this job, I am autonomous, dynamic and with great interpersonal skills. So I would wish integrate your team to contribute to the development of your turnover.
I am enthusiastic about exploring opportunities in your company and look forward to meeting you. Please do not hesitate to call me so we can discuss in greater depth.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-04-2016 11:25
Message de annadream posté le 09-04-2016 à 10:41:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois postuler à un
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses
Following your ad on your website, I am applying for the sales coordinator’s position in your office.
I am currently in my second year of BTS Tourism and I will take my exam in July. I will be available from July. Thanks to my education, I am able to give advices about different destinations that you propose in your company and to use sales technics to sell travels. I also had an internship in welcoming and in a travel agency to familiarize myself with the work on the field. Moreover, I studied abroad for a month and I know how this type of travel are organized. I know your compagny for a few years now and I stand regularly informed of your company’s news. Interested by “work & study abroad programs” for a long time, I choose to conduct a study about it for my exam that I will defend in June. So, I think I have the knowledge and the interest necessary to carry out missions that will be entrusted to me.
Very motivated to get this job, I am autonomous, dynamic and with great interpersonal skills. So I would wish integrate your team to contribute to the development of your turnover.
I am enthusiastic about exploring opportunities in your company and look forward to meeting you. Please do not hesitate to call me so we can discuss in greater depth.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-04-2016 11:25
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