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Message de neferpito posté le 14-10-2016 à 14:25:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger cette lettre de motivation s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses!
I'm a young graduated in Labour Scicences of UCL in xxx and I would like to join your business internship program in xxx.
My goal is to find a job in the area of Human Ressources. I am fortunate to leave near xxx, the seat of most of the institutions of the European Union. I would like to take this opportunity to work in rich environment with interesting people who come from all around Europe. That's the reason why I would like to get a internship in the European Commission. It would be a real springboard for my career and I'm sure I will learn a lot. Of course, I'd rather find an internship in the field of human resources, but if it can not be too bad.
Given that it is not always possible to get the internship of your dreams, my second choice will be to find a internship with a NGO, still in the sector of ressources human. I'm someone who sensitized to the human cause and work with people who defend the same right as i can be very rewarding. I'm actually volonteer at xxx and I'm volonteer in various charity for years.
My long term goal is to work in developing countries. So staying in Malta is for me a true possibility to improve my level of english as well as learn more about the maltese cultur.
Being curious and motivated, I plan to profit of personnal and professional benefits of this internship program. I'm seeing this stay as a must step in my university studies and a major asset for building my career.
Please, let me know if you need further information.
Best regards,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-10-2016 17:11
Message de neferpito posté le 14-10-2016 à 14:25:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger cette lettre de motivation s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses!
I'm a young graduated in Labour Scicences of UCL in xxx and I would like to join your business internship program in xxx.
My goal is to find a job in the area of Human Ressources. I am fortunate to leave near xxx, the seat of most of the institutions of the European Union. I would like to take this opportunity to work in rich environment with interesting people who come from all around Europe. That's the reason why I would like to get a internship in the European Commission. It would be a real springboard for my career and I'm sure I will learn a lot. Of course, I'd rather find an internship in the field of human resources, but if it can not be too bad.
Given that it is not always possible to get the internship of your dreams, my second choice will be to find a internship with a NGO, still in the sector of ressources human. I'm someone who sensitized to the human cause and work with people who defend the same right as i can be very rewarding. I'm actually volonteer at xxx and I'm volonteer in various charity for years.
My long term goal is to work in developing countries. So staying in Malta is for me a true possibility to improve my level of english as well as learn more about the maltese cultur.
Being curious and motivated, I plan to profit of personnal and professional benefits of this internship program. I'm seeing this stay as a must step in my university studies and a major asset for building my career.
Please, let me know if you need further information.
Best regards,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-10-2016 17:11
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