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Message de bleurouge posté le 30-10-2016 à 18:01:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis étudiant en deuxième année d'eco gestion et je souhaite faire ma 3e année soit au RU soit aux pays nordiques, pour cela je dois faire une lettre de motivation en anglais. Pouvez-vous m'indiquer les éventuelles erreurssvp s'il vous plait ?
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
... I would like to internationalize my CV and really improve my English. So I decided to apply for an Erasmus in the area United Kingdom / Ireland / Nordic Countries. I have chosen this bachelor because I really appreciate mathematics and I am interested by economy. My new knowledge acquired in business and management allowed me to confirm an old interest for the purchasing sector, so now I would like to become an international buyer especially for the sourcing that it involve.
So, the reason that I would like to go in this area is essentially professional. In all add I consulted, for give me an idea of this job, the only skill who is always present is to practice efficiently English, so for my professional career, and the future position I will be apply, it’s mandatory to speak a fluent English and this is why I hope for my study to evolve in an English environment; because I think it’s the best way to learn a language.
However I think this experience can bring me more than a language, after be informed about the educative system I really curious to discover it, the quality of universities in this part of the world is known per all, it’s a chance to study in a top university with students who come around the world. Also, it can be the birth of a lot of new leisure, a new lifestyle, may be another way of thinking, an opportunity to see the world under another angle. I would like to leave to open my mind and find out another culture. The idea to be into a new environment to pursue my studies represents for me a real motivation.
If I am chosen, I think I will have my parts of apprehension: What kind of person I will meet? Will I be finally able to speak fluent English? Will I be able to adapt to this new lifestyle? So, I hope that it will be grateful experience for both professional and social plan.
Despite this, I have my lot of certitude too: I think that I am enough independent and sensible for stay concentrate in my studies and my professional purpose. I’m ready to follow learned lesson before the beginning of the year. Furthermore, I will try to get an internship in the same country of my Erasmus during the holidays and, of course, in the purchasing sector. I’m also sure that this experience is a unique opportunity and I can’t miss it, I’m really motivated for this abroad year and I hope you had seen that.
I am currently available for interview and would welcome the opportunity to discuss in more detail. I look forward to hearing from you and I hope you will consider my application favourably
Yours faithfully.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-10-2016 18:21
Message de bleurouge posté le 30-10-2016 à 18:01:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis étudiant en deuxième année d'eco gestion et je souhaite faire ma 3e année soit au RU soit aux pays nordiques, pour cela je dois faire une lettre de motivation en anglais. Pouvez-vous m'indiquer les éventuelles erreurs
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
... I would like to internationalize my CV and really improve my English. So I decided to apply for an Erasmus in the area United Kingdom / Ireland / Nordic Countries. I have chosen this bachelor because I really appreciate mathematics and I am interested by economy. My new knowledge acquired in business and management allowed me to confirm an old interest for the purchasing sector, so now I would like to become an international buyer especially for the sourcing that it involve.
So, the reason that I would like to go in this area is essentially professional. In all add I consulted, for give me an idea of this job, the only skill who is always present is to practice efficiently English, so for my professional career, and the future position I will be apply, it’s mandatory to speak a fluent English and this is why I hope for my study to evolve in an English environment; because I think it’s the best way to learn a language.
However I think this experience can bring me more than a language, after be informed about the educative system I really curious to discover it, the quality of universities in this part of the world is known per all, it’s a chance to study in a top university with students who come around the world. Also, it can be the birth of a lot of new leisure, a new lifestyle, may be another way of thinking, an opportunity to see the world under another angle. I would like to leave to open my mind and find out another culture. The idea to be into a new environment to pursue my studies represents for me a real motivation.
If I am chosen, I think I will have my parts of apprehension: What kind of person I will meet? Will I be finally able to speak fluent English? Will I be able to adapt to this new lifestyle? So, I hope that it will be grateful experience for both professional and social plan.
Despite this, I have my lot of certitude too: I think that I am enough independent and sensible for stay concentrate in my studies and my professional purpose. I’m ready to follow learned lesson before the beginning of the year. Furthermore, I will try to get an internship in the same country of my Erasmus during the holidays and, of course, in the purchasing sector. I’m also sure that this experience is a unique opportunity and I can’t miss it, I’m really motivated for this abroad year and I hope you had seen that.
I am currently available for interview and would welcome the opportunity to discuss in more detail. I look forward to hearing from you and I hope you will consider my application favourably
Yours faithfully.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-10-2016 18:21
Réponse : Motivation/ Erasmus UK de bleurouge, postée le 02-11-2016 à 15:51:01 (S | E)
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