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Message de jim18 posté le 04-02-2017 à 20:31:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Pendant l'été je vais partir à xxx et j'aimerais y trouvé un petit boulot. Pour cela j'ai écrit un mail de motivation pour y joindre mon CV. J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à corriger les éventuelles fautes.
Merci d'avance à tous!
To whom it may concern.
I am a French student in preparatory class to integrate selective universities.
I am writing to you in order to apply for a summer job from July ..st till August …th 2017.
I am highly motivated to work for any job that you could offer me.
This work abroad takes place in the pursuit of my future studies as an engineer. I believe that working experiences abroad are a real asset in the labor world both for the skills they provide and also for the culture on the country.
My studies taught me to be rigorous and organized, namely to follow a strict schedule but also to be autonomous and to know how to adapt to the situation.
+AVANTAGE POUR BOULOT
Moreover, my dynamism and my true willingness to work could be an advantage for your company. In addition, I am an energetic and hardworking person so I will take my work seriously.
I do hope you will kindly consider my request. A job in your company would enable me to gain experience and improve my English level. You will find further details of my career in the attached resume.
If you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Thank you for your consideration regarding my application.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-02-2017 18:10
Message de jim18 posté le 04-02-2017 à 20:31:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Pendant l'été je vais partir à xxx et j'aimerais y trouvé un petit boulot. Pour cela j'ai écrit un mail de motivation pour y joindre mon CV. J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à corriger les éventuelles fautes.
Merci d'avance à tous!
To whom it may concern.
I am a French student in preparatory class to integrate selective universities.
I am writing to you in order to apply for a summer job from July ..st till August …th 2017.
I am highly motivated to work for any job that you could offer me.
This work abroad takes place in the pursuit of my future studies as an engineer. I believe that working experiences abroad are a real asset in the labor world both for the skills they provide and also for the culture on the country.
My studies taught me to be rigorous and organized, namely to follow a strict schedule but also to be autonomous and to know how to adapt to the situation.
+AVANTAGE POUR BOULOT
Moreover, my dynamism and my true willingness to work could be an advantage for your company. In addition, I am an energetic and hardworking person so I will take my work seriously.
I do hope you will kindly consider my request. A job in your company would enable me to gain experience and improve my English level. You will find further details of my career in the attached resume.
If you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Thank you for your consideration regarding my application.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-02-2017 18:10
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